Phillip Tarrant
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The creation screen shows a race's blurb on its card and the chosen calling's
blurb in the detail panel directly above the DM panel. Blurb and fragment are on
screen at the same moment, inches apart — so a fragment that paraphrases its own
blurb makes the DM sound like it is reciting the card. Four did:
- bonesetter lifted two clauses verbatim ("you set the bone, you say the words")
- reaver re-ran the blurb's door image with the same sentence shape
- hedge_mage re-opened on "what you know" and re-landed the dead teacher
- beastfolk repeated both the claws and the being-judged beat
Each now says the NEXT thing instead: the hour they wake you and which of the
two trades you will not claim credit for; the employer who arranges to be
elsewhere; where you went to fail safely and what the book's gaps cost your
skin; the town that takes your coin and still wants you outside the walls.
beastfolk's rewrite also breaks the race-set monotony — it no longer opens "You
were born" (now unique to human) and drops the shared "X, and you have…" spine,
so clicking the four cards in a row stops reading as one voice.
The parity test guarded presence but could not fail on the three properties that
actually make all 28 race×calling concatenations grammatical. It now asserts
race fragments start uppercase and end with '.', and calling fragments start
lowercase and end with '.' — verified by breaking both and watching all four new
assertions fire.
255 client tests green; content build --check green.
Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
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{ "id": "hedge_mage", "name": "Hedge-Mage", "blurb": "No tower took you. What you know, you got from a book you should not have had and a teacher who is not alive to confirm it.", "fragment": "you taught yourself the rest where nobody would come looking, and the scars are from the parts the book got wrong." }
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