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55 Commits

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63c7039bf1 fix(ch01): fix typos, dialogue punctuation, and tighten cold-read parenthetical
Fix pre-existing typos (intellegent, interupted, furiture), double quote
mark, stray period, and dialogue attribution punctuation. Tighten the
Mere cold-read parenthetical for better fragment consistency.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.6 <noreply@anthropic.com>
2026-03-03 09:07:48 -06:00
47b93c1c3e docs: add 'the noise' parenthetical convention to style guides
Update voice guidelines, KDP formatting rules, and pacing section
with the noise parenthetical convention for Phelan's ADD tangents.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.6 <noreply@anthropic.com>
2026-03-03 09:05:00 -06:00
802256efe9 feat(ch02): apply parenthetical tangent convention
Convert scenario planning obsessive detail, kettle Flaw Sight analysis,
and second-bedroom spiral to parenthetical format. Add two new noise
flashes (feverwort probability calc, arcane district pricing assessment).

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.6 <noreply@anthropic.com>
2026-03-03 09:03:50 -06:00
b53e92668f feat(ch01): convert remaining tangents to parenthetical format
Add parenthetical asides for meal-counting, Mere cold-read, hand-brush
overthinking, and house-cost arithmetic. Add two new brief noise flashes
(dockworker read, customs wall analysis) to establish constant frequency.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.6 <noreply@anthropic.com>
2026-03-03 08:53:08 -06:00
db048eb971 feat(ch01): introduce 'the noise' naming and first parenthetical tangent
Convert ward-jar flaw analysis to parenthetical aside format and add
the naming passage establishing Phelan's constant mental processing
as "the noise" — the first instance of the new tangent convention.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.6 <noreply@anthropic.com>
2026-03-03 08:48:01 -06:00