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work on book 2, also redo of the book title, and code name for Phelan

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Phillip Tarrant
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@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ The siege was over. The house was just a house again.
Calla opened the door before I knocked. She'd been watching from the window — old habits, the ones that formed during weeks of waiting for news that was never good.
"Shade." She stepped aside. "Come in."
"Locksmith." She stepped aside. "Come in."
She looked different too. Not relaxed — I doubted Calla Floundry had been relaxed in the conventional sense since the curse hit. But the white-knuckle quality was gone. The controlled composure that had impressed me on the first visit — the organized documents, the meticulous timeline, the way she'd managed her own terror with filing systems and clean sheets — had softened into something less rigid. She was still standing at attention. She'd just stopped bracing for impact.
@@ -108,13 +108,13 @@ I stood, nodded to Calla at the door, and walked back into the morning.
Fourteen Greystone Lane hadn't changed. The building's deliberate unremarkability — the quality that had made me walk past it six times before my first visit — was exactly as effective as it had always been. The ward-work on the exterior registered through my sluggish Flaw Sight as a blurred suggestion of competence rather than the crisp three-layer architecture I'd mapped weeks ago.
The receptionist was exactly as polite as always. "Ledger is expecting you, Shade. Planning room."
The receptionist was exactly as polite as always. "Ledger is expecting you, Locksmith. Planning room."
The planning room still had Leon's colour-coded diagrams pinned to the wall. Someone had cleaned the floor — the spot where I'd crashed days ago showed no evidence of fourteen unconscious hours. The guild was tidy about its messes.
Ledger was seated at the table with a thin folder. He'd been waiting — not impatiently, because Ledger didn't do impatience. Waiting was just another form of observation.
"Shade." He gestured to the chair across from him. "You look better than you should, given the reports."
"Locksmith." He gestured to the chair across from him. "You look better than you should, given the reports."
"Low bar."
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"What you did. The Floundry case. Breaking a Compact-classified 'unbreakable' curse with a three-phase coordinated intervention using a team of unlicensed operators and a botanical preparation the Compact has spent five years acquiring the supply of." He paused, and the pause was the closest Ledger came to emphasis. "The guild has noticed."
He didn't elaborate. Didn't explain what *noticing* meant in guild terms — whether it was a reclassification, a shift in case assignment, a recalibration of what the name "Shade" meant in the network's internal shorthand. Just the statement. The guild has noticed. Left hanging, because Ledger understood that implications were more powerful than explanations, and because Ledger never gave you a syllable more than he intended.
He didn't elaborate. Didn't explain what *noticing* meant in guild terms — whether it was a reclassification, a shift in case assignment, a recalibration of what the name "Locksmith" meant in the network's internal shorthand. Just the statement. The guild has noticed. Left hanging, because Ledger understood that implications were more powerful than explanations, and because Ledger never gave you a syllable more than he intended.
"Anything else?" he asked.