analysis cleanup 1-5

world/locations/drenwick.md

@@ -19,3 +19,10 @@ Known spaces:
 - **Interview room** — where clients are brought after passing the receptionist's filter
 - **Ledger's office** — Guild Master's working space
 - **Planning library** — a small working reference room available to guild members. Shelves of history books, old maps, and herb reference charts. Two or three tables with four chairs each, meant for spreading out research and planning work. Functional, not grand — it matches the Guild's character. Used for expedition logistics, case research, and any meeting that needs neutral professional ground.
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+## Sensory Anchors
+
+- **Dockside at dusk:** Tar, salt, fish oil smell. Barge lanterns lit against early dark. River traffic settling.
+- **Arcane district morning:** Cobblestones damp with overnight dew. Thin autumn light. Half-shuttered shops.
+- **General:** Fish and forge smoke. Barge horns (low, flat notes). Urban perfume of too many people.
+- **Mill road at night:** Usually deserted after dark. Adjacent to Phelan's shack.

world/story-summary-book1.md

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
 
 **Magic/Exploits:** Flaw Sight (passive) — notices a ward-jar on the third shelf has a resonance gap between second and third anchors causing moisture seepage. No active exploits.
 
-**Plot threads opened:** Guild application pending (6 weeks); house/land dream (1,300 silvers needed); Mere introduction (unnamed); Flaw Sight established as constant/involuntary; Gavren aware Phelan will leave.
+**Plot threads opened:** Guild application pending (6 weeks); house/land dream (1,300 silvers needed); Mere introduction (unnamed); Flaw Sight established as constant/involuntary; Gavren aware Phelan will leave. Micro-hook: faint magical trace near shack door — old residue from a warded object, filed and dismissed.
 
 **Chapter-ending state:** Quiet hook. Phelan falls asleep thinking about the unnamed woman.
 
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
 
 **Magic/Exploits:** Flaw Sight (passive/active) — sees channeling efficiency loss from chisel slip at Aldric's. Mere's curse management approach described (binding salts + silverthorn).
 
-**Plot threads opened/advanced:** Mere relationship developing (name learned, first date); cursed dog subplot introduced; Mere's home life tension hinted (mother rearranges workspace past sixth bell); Thursday meeting set.
+**Plot threads opened/advanced:** Mere relationship developing (name learned, first date); cursed dog subplot introduced; Mere's home life tension hinted (mother rearranges workspace past sixth bell); Thursday meeting set. Mere mentions someone told her about binding salts' dampening properties (seeds Devod family knowledge). Micro-detail: booted footsteps on mill road at night, catalogued. Coffee-rejection noise parenthetical added.
 
 **Chapter-ending state:** Micro-hook. Phelan falls asleep thinking about flaws — in kettles, in curses, and in bedrooms that feel too small.
 
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@
 
 **Magic/Exploits:** Flaw Sight (passive) — reads guild building ward architecture. Combat magic concealment — Phelan lies about having only basic defensive work.
 
-**Plot threads opened/advanced:** Guild membership accepted (Tier One); guild structure revealed (20% commission, retainer, code); guild intelligence network demonstrated; Phelan's background filled in (Brannick's Academy, Caldburn hometown, mother living/no contact, no father); combat magic concealment established; observer noticed pause on combat question; house timeline recalculated (13 years from 40).
+**Plot threads opened/advanced:** Guild membership accepted (Tier One); guild structure revealed (20% commission, retainer, code); guild intelligence network demonstrated; Phelan's background filled in (Brannick's Academy, Caldburn hometown, mother living/no contact, no father); combat magic concealment established; observer noticed pause on combat question; house timeline recalculated (13 years from 40). Noise parenthetical at guild acceptance (financial recalculation, thirteen replacing forty). External threat seed: woman in gray coat seen near guild building, then again during walk home.
 
 **Chapter-ending state:** Resolution with forward momentum. 15 silvers, first non-austerity meal. Two-week window before first engagement.
 
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@
 
 **Magic/Exploits:** Recap of dog cure (Exploit #1). Leon's Vethani Crypts exploit described (Exploit #2 — noise overload, 400 inputs). Phelan's fire magic test: sluggish, weak, unpracticed 4–5 years.
 
-**Plot threads opened/advanced:** Guild career begins; Barrows job (NS-7714) introduced; combat magic rust confirmed; Leon's refusal to join guild; Mere relationship deepening (bedroom too small); Sniff named; Greymarch Barrows foreshadowed (pre-Compact, residual wards, cave stalkers, 3 confirmed kills in last decade).
+**Plot threads opened/advanced:** Guild career begins; Barrows job (NS-7714) introduced; combat magic rust confirmed; Leon's refusal to join guild; Mere relationship deepening (bedroom too small); Sniff named; Greymarch Barrows foreshadowed (pre-Compact, residual wards, cave stalkers, 3 confirmed kills in last decade). Leon mentions Carterson (ward-resistance compounds, guild quarter edge) — name-drop referral. Dramatized Thresholds visit: amplification sequence discussion with Mere; customer asks about unbreakable curses (seeds Floundry); Mere mentions her father dismissively (seeds Devod).
 
 **Chapter-ending state:** Micro-hook. Phelan produces a weak, flickering fire from his palm. Two days until the Friday briefing.
 

world/timeline-book1.md

@@ -118,8 +118,8 @@ The Ch05 Leon visit is a social call during the two-week notice period, unrelate
 
 ## Days of the Week
 
-- **Godsday** — established (Ch01: Mrs. Dallery visits every Godsday morning)
-- Other day names not yet established — standard "Thursday," "Friday," "Wednesday" used in narration. Decide whether Corvel uses these same names or has its own calendar.
+- **Godsday** — Sunday equivalent. A weekly rest/worship day. (Ch01: Mrs. Dallery visits every Godsday morning)
+- Standard English day names used for all other days (Monday through Saturday). Corvel's calendar mirrors the reader's week, with Godsday replacing Sunday.
 
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