Chapter 13 final, chapter 14 primed
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| ~33 | Ch10 | **Wednesday** | Shack realization ("partner" changes requirements). Guild alias considered (nothing fits). Afternoon: Floundry case brief (NS-7721) delivered. 150 silvers, unbreakable curse, Ned Floundry, 4–6 weeks remaining. |
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| ~34 | Ch11 | **Thursday** | Seventh bell: Ledger delivers folio at shack. Morning: Phelan visits Floundry home, meets Calla, reviews reports, alias "Shade" chosen. Calla shows recent illegible scraps, asks him to return at third bell. Phelan visits Thresholds (briefs Mere, Devod Fields named). Third bell: return to Floundry home, sees Ned, full scraps progression, bracelet-enhanced Flaw Sight reveals 3-layer curse. Writes Ned a promise note. Walks home. |
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| ~35 | Ch12 | **Friday** | Fifth bell: Phelan at table processing curse architecture from memory (bracelet-enhanced recall). Three-layer solution mapping: Layer 1 → ghostveil moss (dampening agent, Sniff/binding salts parallel); Layer 2 → forge-and-redirect (death ward technique); Layer 3 → anchor drift visible but unsolved. Brief stop at Thresholds (Mere gives Devod intel, doesn't go). Visits Devod at Millford Street (late morning). Case intel: Ned's vendor concerns, dead-drop instruction. Velken's Drift mine identified as ghostveil moss source. Devod mentions "my daughter" → Phelan's non-reaction reveals connection → testing questions → "partner" confirmed. **Charlette Fields named.** Mother revelation: owns Thresholds, income control, ultimatum at 12, Devod forced out. Unsent gifts (12 years). Expedition planned: Phelan, Mere, Devod + Carter supplies. Walks home — noise on two tracks (Layer 3 unsolved, Mere's situation). House plans look different. |
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| ~36 | Ch13 | **Saturday** | Saturday morning: guild HQ, Compact regulatory letter (Section 14c), Ledger's note backing client. Cassius Rykhard encounter outside guild — 25 gold bribe offered and refused. Tenth bell: planning library, Mere and Devod first proximity, mine expedition planned. Saturday afternoon: Carter's shop, supplies assembled, focusing ring revealed and purchased (12 silvers). Walk home. Mine expedition set: tomorrow (Sunday), fifth bell. |
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| Ch10 (Wednesday) → Ch11 (Thursday) | 1 day | Ch11: "seventh bell Thursday morning," brief on table "fourteen hours" |
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| Ch11 (Thursday) → Ch12 (Friday) | 1 day | Ch12: full night's rest, bracelet amber-red (charged), working from fifth bell |
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| **Ch01 → Ch12 (total)** | **~34–35 days** | ~5 weeks |
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| Ch12 (Friday) → Ch13 (Saturday) | 1 day | Ch13: Saturday morning, guild correspondence |
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| **Ch01 → Ch13 (total)** | **~35–36 days** | ~5 weeks |
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| Half past nine | ~9:30 AM | Mid-morning arrival | Ch02 |
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| Third bell | ~3:00 PM | Afternoon appointment (Calla's return time) | Ch11 |
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| Fifth bell | ~5:00 AM | Morning shift start (Devod at Henwick's yard) | Ch11 (referenced) |
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| Tenth bell | ~10:00 AM | Morning planning meeting | Ch13 |
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| Fifth bell | ~5:00 AM | Mine expedition departure (planned for tomorrow) | Ch13 |
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4. Flag any conflicts with existing timeline entries
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5. Resolve or note any Continuity Flags
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*Last updated: Ch12 final (2026-03-06)*
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*Last updated: Ch13 final (2026-03-07)*
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