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| Ch10 | Spots bracelet under Phelan's sleeve before he reveals it. Identifies pre-Compact inscription style on sight. Asks "What happens when it's full?" — catches something Phelan's noise missed (system states vs. system flaws). Identifies conditional (*if-then*) logic in bracelet notation using grammar analysis — structural/linguistic contribution, not magical. **Declares "You're my partner"** — data-driven conclusion based on observed trust hierarchy (he hid bracelet from guild and Leon, brought it to her). Noise stops again. | relationship, skill, revelation |
| Ch12 | Brief appearance at Thresholds. Gives Phelan practical intel on Devod (schedule, habits, approach). Describes Devod's environment with clinical precision frozen at age twelve — "He's not disorganised. He just has more plans than hours." Doesn't go with Phelan — her avoidance of Devod is active and ongoing. Absence is structurally necessary for Devod to reveal the mother situation. **Mother named as Charlette Fields** (by Devod, not Mere). | backstory, revelation |
| Ch14 | Mine expedition. Monosyllabic responses on cart (not punishment — just Mere, but Devod reads it as such). Inventories collection kit four times. Marks residue pockets with chalk (systematic, practical). During fight: secures supplies without being told. Post-fight: assesses Devod's protective instinct — he protected her, not the equipment. Inconsistent with model. Filed, not processed. Moss located: immediately in assessment mode (substrate, growth rate, harvest technique). "An hour, maybe less." | skill, revelation |
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