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   - Book 2 Ch02: 13 seconds (accuracy work, sustained thread at chalk target, 12 paces — ugly, 50% success rate)
   - Book 2 Ch07: 13 seconds (ugly but stable, absorbing instead of correcting — "almost gone")
   - Book 2 Ch08: 14 seconds (ugly, unstable past twelve, targeting drift only in last half-second — full second longer than previous ceiling. Key change: absorbing through instability instead of correcting)
-- **Key limitation:** Targeting locks in at ~9 seconds. Environmental disruption before that window causes compensation rather than absorption. The ring's micro-pulse (~1.3 second stabilisation rhythm) saturates instinct past 12 seconds, causing handoff to conscious correction which overcorrects and introduces drift.
+  - Book 2 Ch12: 15 seconds (integrated, ugly, unstable, holding — absorbing through instability continues as the dominant technique)
+  - Book 2 Ch21: **15 seconds plateau confirmed and acknowledged on-page.** The absorption-through-instability has smoothed to absorption without instability at some point in the last week without Phelan noticing. The ugly has smoothed. The ceiling holds. Phelan reaches for the sixteenth second and cannot find a gap in the ring's recovery cycle that would let him thread through. Leon names the ceiling out loud: *"You're not going to get sixteen out of Carterson's ring."* Plateau acknowledged as plateau, not as a setback — **primes Book 3 for a new ring or secondary focusing tool.**
+- **Key limitation:** Targeting locks in at ~9 seconds. Environmental disruption before that window causes compensation rather than absorption. The ring's micro-pulse (~1.3 second stabilisation rhythm) saturates instinct past 12 seconds, causing handoff to conscious correction which overcorrects and introduces drift. **Ch21 canon: Carterson's Ring has a hard ceiling at fifteen seconds.** The gap for a sixteenth second that Phelan had been feeling for does not exist in the current ring's recovery cycle — no flaw to thread through. Any further extension requires new hardware, not new practice.
 - **Training method:** Leon provides variable-timing heat pressure from off-angle during sustained thread exercises. Tests structural absorption vs. reactive compensation.
 - **Significance:** The ring's original specification (Ch13) was 15–20ft range. Sustained channelling extends this to 25–30ft trained, 35–40ft theoretical maximum. The 3-month training arc moves the ring from a range multiplier to a sustained combat tool. Full technique documentation: `/world/magic/fire-magic.md`
 

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 | 15 (night, cont.) | Ch19 | **Day 15** (Godsday night) | Leon calls via soundstone — Kae needs Mere. Phelan/Ledger split: Phelan to Millford for Mere, Ledger to guild hall. Mere treats Kae at Brida's (80% pain relief). Escort to 14 Greystone Lane. Brief debrief (Ledger's Book 3 seed). The deal: Kae's testimony for treatment/safe house/custody. Elara murder revealed. Deal signed. |
 | 16 | — | **Day 16** (Monday equiv.) | Recovery day. Off-screen. Everyone rests. Mere continues Kae's herbal treatment at guild safehouse. Kae's custody transition underway. |
 | 17 | Ch20 | **Day 17** (Twosday) | Morning: Ledger's runner delivers note at Chandler's Row — third bell, Greystone Lane, *private* debrief room. Afternoon third bell: Phelan arrives via long route through merchants' quarter. Three-phase meeting, single continuous scene. **Phase 1:** Case closure — connection log filed, Kae's testimony (two nights back) recorded, Cass indicted on paper (Regulated Artifact statute, institutional prosecution path). Vellen Thrace deferred with *"one I want to come back to."* Kae: safehouse, 80% herbal relief, Ledger operational custody. Leon's containment "clean, not tactical." Carson's network formally recognised. **Case fee delivered:** 150 silvers gross / 120 net in a guild-sealed coin pouch. **Phase 2:** Ledger pivots — *"I was there, Locksmith. That wasn't curse-breaking."* Phelan's curated three-layer answer (bracelet / rare pathway sight / "I just think differently"), word *flaw* withheld. Ledger: *"That's not exactly what I saw, but close enough for the paperwork."* Private file established off-record. **Phase 3:** Second pause. Thinner off-book folder. Tier Two structural disclosure — Vellen was illegitimate son of Duchess Isolde Merrenwood of Wenlow. Housekeeping + leverage-banking motive spelled out. Standing rule: *"The guild stays out of noble politics unless called on. Duchess Merrenwood has not called on us. And yet."* Ledger defers decision. Meeting ends. **Evening:** Phelan walks home via merchants' quarter to Chandler's Row. Chapter closes on unresolved kid parentheticals. |
+| 18 | Ch21 | **Day 18** (Freyasday) | **Sixth bell — training** at chandler's courtyard. Fire integration plateau at 15s acknowledged as plateau (no forced breakthrough). Leon asks Phelan to vet Arren Yule — private collector, 2,400-silver offer for the Harrow Vale threshold seal (pre-Compact, three years back, no offensive load). Buyer-vetting beat externalises Leon's philosophy shift. Carson already cleared the name. **Mid-late morning — Thresholds confrontation** at Hallow and Third. Devod walked from Millford Street before sixth bell, sleeves past elbows, posture changed. Mere leads; options laid out; Devod to the deed: *"Option one."* Charlette: *"Fine."* Notarial stamp, countersigns, witnesses. Thresholds partnership reverted — joint ownership restored, Charlette without signing authority on Mere's accounts. Out in the Hallow Street sun: *"That's done."* Devod peels off at the canal turn. **Late morning — Carter's shop** (Mere present). Carter welcomes Mere. Orders running Tier Two referrals from Ledger. Jacket update (accurate: stealth op, did not absorb anything). Tomael arc closed in subtext — Carter cutting leather for a woman in Greymarch Barrows who "should have had one a long time ago." Phelan pays for the last collar-stud adjustment. *"Come by again before winter. Both of you."* Mere: *"We will."* **Afternoon — unscheduled hour.** Phelan walks the long way home through the merchants' quarter. Stops at the old bridge. Bracelet cool. The first unscheduled walk since ~a month before Ledger's first knock. **Dusk — Chandler's Row kitchen scene.** Ledger's runner delivered the 12 silvers/month ghostveil standing order that morning — Mere's first income line in her own name. Case fee from Ch20 counted: 438 silvers saved, 1,300 house target, ~1/3 there, 46/month recurring, ~8 months to half. Rev 11 filed (east-facing kitchen + Devod drainage kernel, sloped hilltop lot). Dinner. Single Kae-status beat (80% holding, moss sustainable). **Evening into night — the marriage/children conversation.** Mere proposes. Phelan deflects to priest (Mere laughs). Mere surfaces children as the real question. Phelan deflects to logistics. Mere: *"Do you want them?"* Phelan: *"I don't know how."* Mere: *"Neither do I. Our genetics are favorable."* Court house research — Mere had it filed last month, before the case. Drenwick Court House civil registry, second floor, counter two, 6 silvers, 10-day waiting period, open 2nd afternoon bell to 7th except Godsday. Phelan: *"Okay. We'll go this week."* **Night — bed, dark.** *(a kid.)* The noise lets it sit. Phelan sleeps. Decision private to Phelan and Mere per Book 2 lock. |
 
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+## Ch21: The New Quiet — Continuity Notes
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+- **Day 18 (Freyasday).** Day after the Ch20 debrief. Three days after the deal signing (Day 15 Godsday night).
+- **Five scenes, one day, dawn to night:** (1) sixth-bell training at chandler's courtyard; (2) mid-late morning Thresholds confrontation at Hallow and Third; (3) late morning Carter's shop (with Mere); (4) unscheduled afternoon walk + dusk Chandler's Row financial beat; (5) evening-into-night kitchen scene (marriage + children) plus closing bed/dark micro-scene.
+- **Sixth bell training is the first on-page daily session since Ch12.** Fire plateau at 15 seconds on-page confirmed as plateau. No forced breakthrough. Leon names it: *"You're not going to get sixteen out of Carterson's ring."* Ring canon: Carterson's Ring, primary focusing tool. Sets up Book 3 for a new ring/focusing tool.
+- **Leon's Harrow Vale threshold seal:** Pre-Compact placeable ward, pulled from a ruin three years back (the dig where Leon came back with half a broken boot and a pack that rattled wrong). Locks a doorframe for six to eight bells, no offensive load, one-shot. Fine perimeter engravings in old script, not worn. Being brokered personally to Arren Yule for 2,400 silvers.
+- **Ward pricing canon:** Commoner-class Compact-authorized entry ward = ~10 silvers (Brida's windows as reference). A "good one" = ~50 silvers. 2,400 silvers = 48× a good lock — the price anomaly that tipped Leon into a night of buyer vetting.
+- **Arren Yule:** Private collector, south end of the arcane district. Named only in Ch21 as a throwaway contact for the scene. Carson already cleared the name through his network (no guild ties, no odd habits on the wire). Random collector of artifacts.
+- **Leon's philosophy-shift beat:** Four months ago Leon would have handed the piece to a fence and filed the paperwork under things that weren't his problem. Now he brokers his own deals, vets buyers personally, spent a night turning the seal over looking for a weapon hiding inside a lock. Lands on *"it's a lock"* + hammer metaphor. Never uses the word *growth.*
+- **Thresholds confrontation timing:** Late morning Day 18, during Thresholds' normal trading hours. Mere lays out two options (partnership reversion vs. forgery complaint). Devod answers without looking at Charlette: *"Option one."* Charlette: *"Fine."* Mere had the notarial stamp pre-prepared in the leather case. Thresholds thread is now closed at the file level — any future reference should treat the partnership as reverted and Mere as sole-authority on supply, treatment, and floor.
+- **Devod's physical state (new canon Ch21):** Day 7 post-draining. Walked from Millford Street to Thresholds (Hallow and Third) before sixth bell — Devod's window was dark when Phelan and Mere passed Millford on the way. Sleeves past elbows, posture of someone who spent thirty years doing something other than limping. Grey hair stayed; the Brennan Toor Vethek Pass story (Ch15) is visible in his shoulders now. Phelan's Pathfinder model for Devod is fully rewritten — no speech, silent internal reframe.
+- **Carter's shop visit — Mere present for the first time in the book.** Carter greets her warmly, offers tea, she declines. Jacket stand canon: three new builds with ore studs at collar and cuffs, "none of them exactly like mine" — iteration has moved past Phelan's specific unit.
+- **Jacket on the Ch18 safehouse op — accurate report:** Phelan tells Carter the jacket was worn for a quiet job and did not have to absorb anything. The job stayed stealth, the jacket was insurance, not tested. Future continuity: do not describe Phelan's jacket as combat-tested in Book 2. (The Ch09 Kae fight predates jacket delivery; the Ch18 safehouse op was stealth; no other combat in Ch20-21.)
+- **Tomael arc closed (Ch21 subtext, no name spoken):** Carter: *"Gear I wish I'd been making five years ago. Wish I'd had it sooner. For people who needed it sooner."* Then: cutting leather for a woman in Greymarch Barrows. Tomael's widow is unnamed on-page; Greymarch Barrows is the canonical location of Tomael's death (Ch02).
+- **Unscheduled afternoon:** Phelan's first unscheduled hour in Drenwick since approximately a month before Ledger's first knock (Ch01 Day 1). By Ch21 math, that's roughly six weeks of continuous case/training scheduling ending on Day 18. The cooling bracelet has started to "feel like its own kind of sound" — first on-page indication the bracelet is permanently passive-manual-only post-Ch09 swap.
+- **Mere's first income line:** Twelve silvers/month ghostveil moss standing order from Ledger's office. Delivered by runner Day 18 morning (while Phelan was at training). **First line of income in her name, not Phelan's.** Phelan's phrasing: *"That's yours."* Mere's: *"It's ours."* Note the distinction for any future treatment of finances.
+- **Case fee math on-page (Ch21 kitchen beat):**
+  - **Total savings: 438 silvers.**
+  - **House target: 1,300 silvers.**
+  - **Fraction: ~1/3.**
+  - **Recurring: 46 silvers/month (22 retainer + 12 ore + 12 moss).**
+  - **Time to half target: ~8 months at recurring alone.**
+  - **Phelan's line:** *"Faster if one doesn't drain me first."*
+  - Math is now locked as Ch21 canon for any continuity reference into Epilogue or Book 3 opening.
+- **House plans — Revision 11 filed on-page Ch21.** East-facing kitchen (Rev 10) + Devod's integrated-drainage kernel (hollow-piling from Ch01). Drafted by Phelan on a scrap the night of Day 17; Mere had added three lines of annotation he did not remember her adding. Laid over Rev 10 — "It fits." Phelan: *"Rev 11."* Three inches closer.
+- **Lot canon (NEW Ch21):** The lot is explicitly a **sloped hilltop lot,** not just "sloped." First descriptor on-page. Drainage has to route outward and down simultaneously — which is why Devod's Ch01 hollow-piling kernel was the right answer. Any future lot descriptions should carry "hilltop."
+- **Kae status confirmation (Ch21, single beat):** 80% herbal protocol holding. Moss supply sustainable through this winter and the next as long as the guild keeps the twelve-a-month standing order. Ledger has his own reasons for keeping the line. Confirmation, not a time-bomb conversation.
+- **Marriage and children conversation (Ch21 centerpiece):**
+  - Mere proposes at the kitchen table Day 18 evening. *"I've decided we should get married."*
+  - Phelan's first deflection: priest question. Mere laughs (short, surprised). *"You're my partner. I don't care about a priest."*
+  - Real question surfaced: *"Do you want children? I want children. Within the next year. Before I'm in my mid-thirties."* And: *"These things have an order."*
+  - Phelan's second deflection: logistics (Chandler's Row one bedroom, retainer, house months out). Mere: *"Do you want them?"*
+  - Phelan's honest answer: *"I don't know how."* First time said aloud to any person in nearly thirty years. Father wound on-page without naming the father.
+  - Mere: *"Neither do I. I'm going to be wrong a lot. That doesn't matter. What matters is that we do our best. It will work itself out. We aren't dumb people."* Then: *"Our genetics are favorable."*
+  - Phelan's interior acceptance (inside the noise cascade): *(A kid. With Mere. Yes. Yes, I want that.)*
+  - Court house research (Mere had it filed last month, before the case): Drenwick Court House, second floor, civil registry, counter two, six silvers filing fee, ten-day waiting period before the contract takes effect, records check for prior marriage + identity. Hours: 2nd afternoon bell to 7th, daily except Godsday.
+  - Phelan: *"Okay. We'll go this week."*
+  - **Decision is PRIVATE to Phelan and Mere for the entirety of Book 2 per locked canon.** No other character learns across Ch21 or the epilogue. Devod, Leon, Carter, Carson, Ledger all uninformed. Reveals deferred to Book 3.
+- **Ten-day waiting period math:** Day 18 + "this week" (say Day 19-25 filing window) + 10-day waiting period = contract takes legal effect between Day 29 and Day 35. Epilogue can be set before, during, or after the waiting period — any treatment needs to hold to this clock.
+- **Closing micro-scene:** Bed, dark, bracelet on nightstand (cool, not asking). Noise quieter than usual — not silent, Phelan doesn't trust silence from the noise after Brida's. *(a kid.)* — one parenthetical, short, un-spiralled. The noise lets it sit. Phelan sleeps. Final line: *"I slept."*
+- **Sniff:** Not named in Ch21. Presence implied from Ch17 continuity (at Chandler's Row, fed by Jenet Carterson). No on-page appearance.
+- **Bell references used in Ch21:** Sixth bell (training start). "Before sixth bell" (Devod's arrival at Thresholds). Second afternoon bell to seventh bell (court house hours, cited by Mere). No other bells tracked on-page.
+- **Day 19+:** Epilogue territory. Court house filing expected within the week per Phelan's *"Okay. We'll go this week."* Any epilogue time references should account for the filing window + 10-day waiting period.
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 ## Standing Schedule (established)
 
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