chapter 21 complete

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@@ -128,6 +128,7 @@ The Arcane Compact retaliates against Carter for helping Phelan in the Floundry
 | Ch 6-8 | Resolution | Phelan neutralizes Compact leverage on 2 key suppliers. Carter rebuilds with a stronger, Compact-resistant supply network. |
 | Ch 9-10 | Carter learns the truth | Phelan tells Carter that Cass is behind the cutoff. Carter enters the Compact conflict as a conscious participant. |
 | Ch 14 | Jacket delivery | Gives Phelan the studded jacket after Devod's draining -- sees where the case is heading. Ore studs (from Book 1 Ch21 master-grade saturated ore), placed along hem, cuffs, and collar. ~20% passive damage absorption. Delivery line: "If you're going to do something stupid, at least wear something I made." |
+| Ch 21 | **Landing beat — Carter's shop, Mere visit, Tomael arc closed in subtext** | Day 18. Carter's shop running at full commerce, front bell propped open with a brick — his own signal that the shop is functional again, not recovering, not limping. Orders mostly **Tier Two referrals routed through Ledger** over the past week (Ledger closing the Book 2 supply-chain wound quietly, no speech required). Hendrick Voss steady; Ledger's alternative broker closed the last gaps; Maren Harwick has not come back and Carter is fine with that. **Mere visits the shop for the first time in Book 2** — Carter's face does "the small reorganisation it did when he was pleased and trying not to make a production of it." Greets her warmly: *"Mere. Good to have you in the shop — been too long."* Offers tea; she declines with thanks. **Jacket stand holds three new builds, ore studs at collar and cuffs, "none of them exactly like mine"** — Carter's craft has iterated past Phelan's specific unit. **Phelan's jacket report (accurate):** worn on the Ch18 safehouse op, did not have to absorb anything; job stayed stealth as intended. Carter nods and doesn't ask for the pieces. Phelan's noise: *(he'd rather hear the jacket wasn't tested than hear it was.)* **Tomael arc closed in subtext — name never spoken in the shop.** Carter: *"The ore's changed what I can make. The new builds aren't the old builds with a few studs thrown on — they're something else. Gear I wish I'd been making five years ago."* Pauses on *five* just long enough to mean the thing he isn't saying. *"Wish I'd had it sooner. For people who needed it sooner."* Then moves on without moving on: *"I'm cutting leather for one now. Sending it up to Greymarch Barrows when it's done. A woman up there who should have had one a long time ago."* Phelan: *"Good."* Phelan pays for the last quiet adjustment on the collar studs; Carter doesn't want to take the silver; Phelan makes him; he puts it in a tin behind the counter and doesn't pretend it's going anywhere else. **Closing invitation:** *"Come by again before winter. Both of you. Proper visit, not a collar-stud errand."* Mere answers before Phelan can: *"We will."* Phelan leaves through the propped door; the brick is still holding it wide, saying *we're still open* the way Carter says it — and leaving the words out. **Uninformed about Phelan & Mere's marriage/children decision per Book 2 lock.** |
 
 **Key developments:**
 - Relationship with Leon deepens beyond "people who know Phelan" -- Leon vouches for Carter with his own contacts, which is significant trust