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@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ The walk to Millford Street took twelve minutes. Mere covered it in eight. The t
(*Cass targeted Floundry witnesses. Calla, then Ned. Sequential. Now Devod. Not a witness — a connection. My connection. Mere's father. This wasn't about silencing testimony. This was personal.*)
(*"Come by tomorrow, Dad." Twelve hours ago. Twelve hours.*)
(*"Come by tomorrow, Dad." Sixteen hours ago. Sixteen hours.*)
Devod's room was on the second floor, above the tanning works, accessible by an exterior staircase that smelled like chemicals and old wood. The door was open. The neighbor woman — sixties, grey hair pulled back, the competent stillness of someone who'd seen sick people before — stood up when Mere came through.