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- **Full Name:** Phelan Varrant
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- **Known As:** "The Shade" (clients, underworld contacts), "Phelan" (close associates), "Varrant" (guild formality)
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- **Age:** Early-to-mid 30s (exact age flexible — keep consistent once established)
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- **Age:** 32 (established Ch06, line 41)
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- **Occupation:** Herbal supply store clerk (day job, Book 1 opening) → Guild of Necessary Services member
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- **Home:** Rented shack on the dockside of Drenwick — dreams of buying land and building a real house
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- **Guild:** The Guild of Necessary Services
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| Chapter | State | Notes |
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|---------|-------|-------|
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| — | *No finalized chapters yet* | — |
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Example entries:
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| Ch01 | Broke | Meager shop wage, behind on rent |
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| Ch04 | Case retainer received | Significant fee — enough to matter for the house goal |
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| Ch06 | Expenses eating into fee | Equipment, bribes, repairs after hyperfocus crash |
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| Ch01–03 | Broke | Meager shop wage, stretching every copper |
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| Ch04 | Guild interview | No income change — joining the Guild |
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| Ch05 | 40s job brief | Barrows retrieval job offered at 40 silvers |
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| Ch06 | −7s Carter gear | Equipment from Carterson's (7s vs 20s guild catalogue). −20s guild equipment catalogue considered but not purchased |
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| Ch07–08 | No change | In the Barrows — no transactions |
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| Ch09 | +32s net | 40s job pay minus 20% guild commission |
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| Ch10 | Store credit | Store credit at Carter's (no expiration) for inscription fix |
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| Chapter | Development | Category |
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|---------|-------------|----------|
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| — | *No finalized chapters yet* | — |
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Categories: mindset, goal, relationship, skill, revelation, personality
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Example entries:
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| Ch01 | Established at herbal shop — competent but trapped | mindset |
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| Ch03 | Joins the Guild — steps into his real life | goal |
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| Ch05 | Hyperfocus crash — first real vulnerability shown | revelation, personality |
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| Ch02 | First visit to Thresholds — Mere introduced, cold-read apparatus fails on her | relationship |
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| Ch03 | Guild intake — Phelan commits to Necessary Services | goal |
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| Ch04 | Interview panel — identifies Ledger as "most dangerous person in the room" | skill, revelation |
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| Ch05 | Barrows job brief received. Forty silvers. Acknowledges combat magic rust | goal, skill |
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| Ch06 | Combat magic revealed to Leon. Mere's cheek kiss — the noise stops for the first time | skill, relationship |
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| Ch07 | Barrows solo — resonance crawlers killed, verdenshade harvested, death ward analyzed overnight | skill, mindset |
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| Ch08 | Death ward cracked via forge-and-redirect exploit. Bracelet found. First major crash | skill, revelation |
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| Ch09 | Ledger formally introduced — probes combat magic. 32s net. Bracelet hidden from guild | relationship, goal |
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| Ch10 | Carter inscription fix (store credit). Mere "partner" declaration. Bracelet analysis deepened. Brute-force forgery theorized with Leon. Shack realization. Floundry case received | relationship, skill, goal |
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### Book 2
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| Chapter | Development |
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| — | *No finalized chapters yet* |
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| Ch01 | Has plans and drawings. No money. |
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| Ch02 | Mere's moving-in pitch connects to the house goal |
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| Ch07 | Case fee brings the house marginally closer |
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| Ch01 | Plans and drawings pinned to shack wall. No money. Dream exists, no path |
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| Ch09 | "The distance felt measurable" — 32s earned, first real savings. House math shifts from theoretical to possible |
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*Decisions to make as the character develops. Remove entries as they get resolved in prose.*
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- [ ] Exact age?
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- [x] Exact age? → 32 (established Ch06)
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- [ ] Shop owner's name?
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- [ ] Does Phelan quit the herbal shop after joining the Guild, or keep it as a safety net?
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- [ ] What specifically are his "rules he doesn't break"? (Can reveal gradually)
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