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@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ The chair was pushed back from the wall at the angle Mere had left it. The house
 
 (*Reserves assessment. The body's inventory, taken before the body's owner has fully committed to being vertical. Seventy-five percent — up from thirty when I went down last night. The bracelet did most of the work while I slept, the reservoir buffering overnight recovery the way it always does now, smoothing the peaks and filling the valleys. Stone colour: warm amber. Not operational peak, but past the threshold where I'd worry. Flaw Sight: passive hum, steady, the background awareness of magical architecture that never quite shuts off. Migraine: gone. Hands: steady. Heart rate: normal. Today's the day, and the instrument is as ready as it's going to get.*)
 
-I sat up. Put my feet on the floor. The boards were cold — late autumn, river damp, the kind of cold that reminded you this was a shack on a dockside and not a house with a proper foundation.
+I sat up. Put my feet on the floor. The boards were cold — late autumn, river damp, cold that reminded you this was a shack on a dockside and not a house with a proper foundation.
 
 I dressed. Checked the bracelet — the stone had shifted from the tired amber of recovery to a deeper, warmer tone that I'd learned to read the way sailors read weather. Not full. Getting there. The reservoir had been recharging all night, and the conditional logic that Mere had identified in the pre-Compact notation was doing exactly what conditional logic does: evaluating inputs, allocating resources, preparing for what came next.
 
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ I looked at the plans for three seconds longer than I should have, then walked o
 
 * * *
 
-The morning streets between dockside and the guild quarter were doing what morning streets do — carts loading at warehouse doors, a fishmonger arguing with a dockhand about something that would resolve itself or wouldn't, the particular rhythm of a city waking up and deciding, for one more day, to function.
+The morning streets between dockside and the guild quarter were doing what morning streets do — carts loading at warehouse doors, a fishmonger arguing with a dockhand about something that would resolve itself or wouldn't, the rhythm of a city waking up and deciding, for one more day, to function.
 
 (*Walk time: twenty minutes if the legs cooperate. The Floundry home is in the upper guild quarter — residential, quiet, the kind of neighbourhood where curtains twitch when unfamiliar people walk too slowly. Seventh bell is the mark. Ledger will be there. Jonael will have the room staged. Leon will have the monitoring position mapped. Devod will have collected the altered preparation from Thresholds by now. Mere—*)
 
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ The Floundry home resolved out of the guild quarter's residential streets at qua
 
 Ledger was at the front door.
 
-He'd positioned himself the way he positioned everything — with professional precision that looked like casual presence. Leaning against the doorframe, arms crossed, watching the street with the quiet attention of a man who was cataloguing everyone on it without appearing to look at any of them.
+He'd positioned himself the way he positioned everything — with a precision that looked like casual presence. Leaning against the doorframe, arms crossed, watching the street without appearing to look at anyone on it, which meant he was cataloguing all of them.
 
 "Shade," he said.
 
@@ -58,9 +58,9 @@ I went inside.
 
 The stairs creaked. The house smelled the same — clean linen and failing biology, Calla's war against entropy fought with fresh sheets and open windows. The absence of the children was louder than their presence had been. No careful footsteps. No too-old silence from the boy on the landing. No wide eyes from the girl on the stairs. Just the house, holding its breath.
 
-Ned's room had been transformed. Jonael had staged it with the particular competence of a man who prepared spaces the way other people breathed — unconsciously, thoroughly, correctly. Two ceramic light rods positioned to eliminate shadows without creating glare. Water skins and a ceramic pitcher on a side table. Medical kit open and inventoried. A clear corridor from the door to the bed to the window. The chair I'd sat in before had been repositioned at the bedside, with a second chair beside it.
+Ned's room had been transformed. Jonael had staged it the way he did everything — unconsciously, thoroughly, correctly. He prepared spaces the way other people breathed — unconsciously, thoroughly, correctly. Two ceramic light rods positioned to eliminate shadows without creating glare. Water skins and a ceramic pitcher on a side table. Medical kit open and inventoried. A clear corridor from the door to the bed to the window. The chair I'd sat in before had been repositioned at the bedside, with a second chair beside it.
 
-Leon was at the window. He'd set up his monitoring position with the annotated diagrams spread on the sill — the colour-coded overlays, blue for reservoir, red for personal, green for bracelet buffer. He looked up when I entered, assessed me in the professional shorthand of someone who understood reserves and physical cost, and nodded once.
+Leon was at the window. He'd set up his monitoring position with the annotated diagrams spread on the sill — the colour-coded overlays, blue for reservoir, red for personal, green for bracelet buffer. He looked up when I entered, assessed me the way he assessed energy budgets — quick, precise, no wasted attention — and went back to the diagrams.
 
 "Lattice is visible from here," he said. "Full spread. I can read all three layers and the inter-layer connections. Fifteen-second warning if anything feeds back."
 
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ And Mere was at the bedside.
 
 She'd arrived before all of us. The two moss preparations were laid out on a cloth on the side table — two ceramic bowls, one marked with a small scratch on the rim (the altered concentration, I assumed, Mere's system for distinguishing preparations that looked identical but weren't). Her notebook was open beside them. A pocket watch sat on the notebook. She was ready in the way that she was always ready — not with visible tension or dramatic focus, but with the settled precision of someone who had prepared thoroughly and was now simply present, waiting for the work to begin.
 
-Ned lay in the bed. Worse than two days ago, which was worse than five days ago, which was worse than ten days ago. The grey-yellow of his skin had deepened. The patches of hair loss had expanded. His breathing had the catching quality I'd noted on my last visit, except now it was closer to laboured — the gap between not-quite and actually had narrowed. His right hand lay on the blanket, still functional. The left was curled against his chest in the involuntary position it had held since the motor control cascade.
+Ned lay in the bed. Worse than yesterday, which was worse than six days ago when I'd first sat in this chair. The grey-yellow of his skin had deepened. The patches of hair loss had expanded. His breathing had the catching quality I'd noted on my last visit, except now it was closer to laboured — the gap between not-quite and actually had narrowed. His right hand lay on the blanket, still functional. The left was curled against his chest in the involuntary position it had held since the motor control cascade.
 
 His eyes found me when I entered. The half-beat delay. The awareness behind it.
 
@@ -106,11 +106,11 @@ The paste adhered. Ned's breathing didn't change. The room held still.
 
 I let the bracelet engage.
 
-The stone warmed. Flaw Sight sharpened. The curse's lattice bloomed into visibility — the cage of poisoned light I'd first seen ten days ago, the three nested layers that the Compact had called unbreakable and two curse-breakers had failed to crack.
+The stone warmed. Flaw Sight sharpened. The curse's lattice bloomed into visibility — the cage of poisoned light I'd first seen six days ago, the three nested layers that the Compact had called unbreakable and two curse-breakers had failed to crack.
 
 But now I wasn't looking at the whole. I was looking at the seam between Layer 3 and Ned.
 
-The anchor — the dead man's switch keyed to his life-force signature — pulsed at the validation frequency I'd mapped two days ago. Point seven cycles per interval, decaying. The grip tolerance window, contracted twelve percent. The bond weakness threshold at eighteen percent margin.
+The anchor — the dead man's switch keyed to his life-force signature — pulsed at the validation frequency I'd mapped yesterday. Point seven cycles per interval, decaying. The grip tolerance window, contracted twelve percent. The bond weakness threshold at eighteen percent margin.
 
 The altered moss began to work.
 
@@ -198,11 +198,17 @@ My hands were shaking. Sweat ran down my temples. The sustained forging — two-
 
 Ten minutes in. Reserves dropping through forty percent. The stabiliser's channels were buckling under the repair load — the energy meant to sustain Layer 1 was tearing Layer 2 apart instead, each overloaded repair attempt doing more damage than the damage it was responding to. The stabiliser was eating its own system.
 
+"Feedback spike on the third monitoring channel," Leon said from the window. Quiet, precise, the data stripped to what I needed. "The stabiliser's pulling repair energy from Layer 1's outer ring — it's cannibalising the thing it's supposed to protect. If you shift your next injection to the secondary channel, the third will collapse on its own."
+
+He was right. I could see it through the lattice — the third channel was already overloaded, straining under repair energy it was never designed to carry. Injecting there would waste a two-second window on something that was already dying. The secondary channel was the bottleneck. Leon had read the cascade pattern from the outside and found the efficient path before I had.
+
+I shifted. Secondary channel. The next injection landed where it mattered.
+
 Twelve minutes. Thirty percent. My vision had narrowed — the room's periphery was gone, reduced to the chair, the bed, the lattice, the two-second windows that were my entire world. Somewhere outside that world, sounds registered. Raised voices. Something below. Boots on stairs.
 
 I couldn't look. The injection window didn't wait.
 
-Devod moved. I saw it at the edge of my narrowed field — he stood from the stool, picked up his walking stick, and went through the door. His face was set in the particular expression of a man who did what needed doing when the work was threatened.
+Devod moved. I saw it at the edge of my narrowed field — he stood from the stool, picked up his walking stick, and went through the door. His face was set. Not angry. Decided.
 
 The sounds continued. Muffled by the floor, by the door, by the focus that had compressed my awareness to a corridor the width of a two-second window. Someone hit something heavy. A voice — Jonael's register, flat and certain — said something I couldn't parse.
 
@@ -220,29 +226,31 @@ Two down. One to go.
 
 * * *
 
-The door was Jonael's job, and Jonael did his job.
+I learned what happened downstairs in pieces, afterward. Devod told most of it. Jonael filled in the parts Devod had been too busy hitting people to notice. Ledger contributed exactly two sentences, both of which explained everything and nothing.
 
-Four of them came through the front door. Hired hands — no Compact badges, no documentation, no identifying marks. The kind of men who got paid in unmarked coin and didn't ask questions about who they were working for. Cass was nowhere near the Floundry home. Plausible deniability, purchased at the cost of sending amateurs to do professional work.
+Four hired hands came through the front door. No Compact badges, no documentation, no identifying marks — the kind of people you pay in unmarked coin when you want the option of pretending you never met them. Cass hadn't come anywhere near the Floundry home. Plausible deniability, purchased at the cost of sending amateurs.
 
-Jonael went down to meet them. Not at the top of the stairs — at the bottom, in the front hallway, because Jonael understood that a guarded door meant controlling the approach, not waiting for the threat to arrive at the threshold. Five-foot-five, barrel-built, low centre of gravity, and faster than anyone that solid had a right to be. The first hired man had height and reach. Jonael had positioning and the absolute certainty of a man who'd said *no one gets through the door* and meant it as a physical law.
+Jonael met them at the bottom of the stairs. Not the top — the bottom, in the front hallway, because Jonael understood that guarding a door meant controlling the approach. Five-foot-five, barrel-built, centre of gravity somewhere around his knees, and faster than anyone that solid had a right to be. The first hired hand had six inches of reach on him. Jonael had positioning and the absolute certainty of someone who'd said *no one gets through the door* and meant it the way other people mean gravity.
 
-One punch. The man's head hit the wall on the way down. He didn't get up.
+One punch. According to Devod, the man's head hit the wall on the way down. He didn't get up.
 
-The second came over his fallen colleague with a short cudgel raised. Devod was already on the stairs behind Jonael — walking stick in hand, the expression of a man who did what needed doing when the work was threatened. He brought the stick across the man's forearm with the efficient violence of someone who'd spent thirty years loading and unloading cargo and knew exactly how much force a human joint could absorb before it stopped cooperating. The cudgel dropped. Devod hit him again — collarbone, not head, because Devod was practical, a cracked collarbone disables a man — and the man folded.
+The second came over his fallen colleague with a short cudgel raised. Devod was already on the stairs behind Jonael — walking stick in hand, no hesitation. Thirty years of loading and unloading cargo had given Devod an intuitive understanding of exactly how much force a human joint could absorb before it stopped cooperating. He brought the stick across the man's forearm. The cudgel dropped. Then the collarbone — not the head, because Devod was practical and a cracked collarbone disables without killing. The man folded.
+
+Devod told this part with the matter-of-fact tone of someone describing a Tuesday. I respected that.
 
 The remaining two backed toward the front door — the only exit that didn't require getting past Jonael and Devod. They made it two steps before they realized someone was standing behind them.
 
-Ledger. He'd stepped out of the kitchen hallway — told Calla to wait, he needed to check on something. Now he stood between them and the door with the unhurried precision of a man whose authority was a function of knowledge rather than volume. He looked at the two remaining hired men the way he looked at everything — with quiet assessment and the particular weight of someone who could name the person who'd sent them, the person who'd paid them, and the person who would be extremely interested to learn about the entire arrangement.
+Ledger had stepped out of the kitchen hallway. Told Calla to wait, he needed to check on something. Now he stood between them and the door with that unhurried quality he carried everywhere — quiet assessment, the implicit weight of someone who could name the person who'd sent them, the person who'd paid them, and the person who would be extremely interested to learn about the entire arrangement.
 
-Then he opened his jacket. Casually. The way another man might adjust a collar.
+Then — and this was the part Devod told with something close to awe — Ledger opened his jacket. Casually. The way another man might adjust a collar.
 
-Four throwing knives sat in a chest harness. Channelled blades — focusing inscriptions running along each spine, convergence nodes glinting near the tips. Carter's work. Carter's *side project*. The anonymous client who'd wanted range and discretion.
+Four throwing knives in a chest harness. Channelled blades — focusing inscriptions running along each spine, convergence nodes near the tips. I knew that work. Carter's work. Carter's *side project*. The anonymous client who'd wanted range and discretion. That client had been Ledger. Of course it had been Ledger.
 
-Ledger didn't touch them. Didn't need to. He just let the hired men see them, and let the silence do the arithmetic — the kind of silence that carried the faintest suggestion of amusement, as though the situation had just become briefly entertaining in a way he'd never admit to finding funny.
+He didn't touch them. Didn't need to. He just let the hired men see them, and let the silence do the arithmetic.
 
-In front of them, Jonael and Devod. Behind them, Ledger. Nowhere to go that didn't involve getting through someone who'd already demonstrated the cost of trying.
+In front: Jonael and Devod. Behind: Ledger and four channelled blades he hadn't even bothered to draw. Nowhere to go that didn't involve getting through someone who'd already demonstrated the cost of trying.
 
-Ledger stepped aside. Not because he had to — because he was giving them the option to leave while leaving was still a choice.
+Ledger stepped aside. Gave them the option to leave while leaving was still a choice.
 
 They took it. Fast enough to trip over each other. The front door banged shut behind them.
 
@@ -256,7 +264,7 @@ I hadn't stopped. The injection window didn't wait. The sounds of the confrontat
 
 "Phase two complete," I said. My voice was rough. "Layer 2 collapsed. Stabiliser weaponised and self-destructed. Layer 1 stripped of structural support."
 
-Leon's voice from the window, steady and professional: "Cascade confirmed. Clean collapse. Layer 1 is exposed — structural integrity at approximately thirty percent and falling. No feedback detected."
+Leon's voice from the window, steady and clinical: "Cascade confirmed. Clean collapse. Layer 1 is exposed — structural integrity at approximately thirty percent and falling. No feedback detected."
 
 I looked at Mere. "Phase three."
 
@@ -274,11 +282,11 @@ The degradation curse was exposed. Layer 3's anchor had fired into empty space.
 
 It was the simplest part of the plan. Standard curse-breaking. Find the structural weak points, apply pressure, let the working collapse.
 
-I'd done this before. I'd done it on a dog's fear curse in a back room in Thresholds with Mere and no idea what I was starting. I'd done it on a death ward in the Barrows with reserves at fifteen percent and a bracelet I didn't yet understand.
+The technique was familiar. A dog's fear curse in a back room in Thresholds — that had been the first time, with Mere beside me and no idea what I was starting. A death ward in the Barrows — reserves at fifteen percent and a bracelet I didn't yet understand.
 
-I could do it now.
+Same principle. Harder stage.
 
-I found the cracks. The degradation curse — properly constructed, genuinely lethal, the work of someone with specifications and inside knowledge — had been weakened past the point of structural viability. The stabiliser's manic repair attempts had shredded the supporting framework. The moss suppressed what remained. Through Flaw Sight's diminished resolution, the lattice looked like a building after a controlled demolition — still standing, but only because nothing had pushed it yet.
+The cracks were everywhere. The degradation curse — properly constructed, genuinely lethal, the work of someone with specifications and inside knowledge — had been weakened past the point of structural viability. The stabiliser's manic repair attempts had shredded the supporting framework. The moss suppressed what remained. Through Flaw Sight's diminished resolution, the lattice looked like a building after a controlled demolition — still standing, but only because nothing had pushed it yet.
 
 Even through the diminished resolution, the degradation curse's structure was visible — concentric rings of runic energy, three major circles nested inside each other, connected by intersecting lines of force that radiated outward like spokes in a wheel. Where those lines were intact, the working held. Where the stabiliser's death throes had torn through the supporting framework, the lines were frayed, snapped, trailing loose ends of energy that flickered and sparked against nothing.
 
@@ -290,7 +298,7 @@ Textbook dissolution. Find the cracks, widen them, let the structure eat itself.
 
 The dissolution radiated inward like cracking a frozen puddle — hit the edge and the centre goes last.
 
-This was the kind of curse-breaking that Practitioner Vellen and Practitioner Dorath had most likely attempted and failed, because when they'd tried it, the stabiliser had been sitting right behind the degradation layer, stitching every fracture closed faster than they could open them. Every gap they'd forced, sealed. Every line they'd snapped, re-anchored. Two competent practitioners hammering at a wall that rebuilt itself between strikes.
+Practitioner Vellen and Practitioner Dorath had most likely attempted exactly this and failed, because when they'd tried it, the stabiliser had been sitting right behind the degradation layer, stitching every fracture closed faster than they could open them. Every gap they'd forced, sealed. Every line they'd snapped, re-anchored. Two competent practitioners hammering at a wall that rebuilt itself between strikes.
 
 The stabiliser wasn't repairing anything now.