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 | Ch19 | **Treatment applied — first on-page.** Already packed when Leon's call comes in (anticipated it). Devod awake at Millford Street, quiet nod from bed. At Brida's: Kae on the floor, shaking, pain visible. Mere applies the three herbal compounds — spine, joints, congenital pain points mapped from bedside research — bandaged in place. **80% pain relief.** Kae goes still: "the absence of pain louder than pain ever was." First effective pain management he's had since Elara. **Flags moss supply:** "What I have won't grow fast enough for ongoing treatment. I'll need fresh cultures." Phelan connects to Velken's Drift. Exits to Devod: **"Dad needs monitoring more than this one does"** (uses "Dad" — established Ch11). Returns to her father while Phelan, Leon, and Ledger walk Kae to the guild hall | Treatment / closure |
 | Ch21 | **Thresholds won; first income line in her name; marriage and children on the table.** Day 18 Freyasday. Carries the partnership documents in a leather case to the corner of Hallow and Third, where Devod (walking from Millford Street before sixth bell) meets them. **The Thresholds confrontation (Scene 2 — Mere leads the whole thing).** At the door: *"Dad, you take the counter. I'll take Charlette."* Speaks the name *Charlette* where another daughter would have said *mom* — the word lands the way *Dad* first landed on the night of the ledgers (Ch11), without fanfare, kept going. Inside: Charlette tries *"I don't know what you think this is"* and Mere returns it sentence by sentence — *"It's the deed. It's the original partnership agreement. It's four years of payments from Devod to you... It's not a question."* Delivers both options flatly: partnership reversion (joint ownership, Mere runs floor and supply/treatment, Charlette without signing authority on any account Mere touches) vs. forgery complaint at the Drenwick Court House. *"Option one is a better offer than you deserve. Devod wants to be amicable. I don't. He gets to decide, because he's the one you cheated."* Had a notarial stamp pre-prepared in the leather case ("Of course she'd had it prepared"). Devod answers: *"Option one."* Charlette: *"Fine."* Countersigns, witnesses, thresholds resolved on paper. Outside in the Hallow Street sun, one short unceremonial release: *"That's done."* Later, watching Devod peel off at the canal turn: *"He's different. I don't know what to do with that yet."* **Carter's shop (with Phelan).** First time in Carter's shop in the book. Carter welcomes her warmly; she declines tea. When Carter says *"Come by again before winter. Both of you. Proper visit, not a collar-stud errand,"* Mere answers before Phelan can: *"We will."* **Late-morning ghostveil moss standing order (first income line in her own name).** Ledger's runner delivered a formal standing order to Chandler's Row that morning — twelve silvers a month, all of it, ongoing Kae care. *"I told the runner yes before he finished the sentence."* When Phelan says *"That's yours,"* Mere corrects him: *"It's ours."* First line of income in Mere's own name; the correction is the character beat. **Kitchen scene — the marriage & children seed (author-locked centerpiece).** Evening. Mere opens flat and declarative: *"We've been too preoccupied with Devod to deal with this, but we need to discuss something. I've decided we should get married."* Not a question — a conclusion she reached weeks ago and has been waiting to surface. When Phelan surfaces out of hyperfocus with *"Do we need to see a priest?"* she **laughs** — rare, warm, caught before she can suppress it; the softness stays in the corner of her mouth after the laugh goes away. Corrects him: *"You're my partner. I don't care about a priest."* **The real pivot is children.** She holds Phelan's hands and drops back to the level declarative: *"Do you want children? I want children. Within the next year. Before I'm in my mid-thirties."* Followed by the social-order clause: *"And it's expected to be married before a child. These things have an order."* When Phelan gives the technical deflect (logistics, money, house), Mere cuts through with flat precision: *"Those are logistics. Do you want them?"* The Misread tool (Ch04–05) turned into a scalpel — imprecise questions don't work on Phelan, so she asks the exact one. When Phelan's honest answer comes (*"I don't know how"*), Mere's locked response is immediate: *"Neither do I. I'm going to be wrong a lot. That doesn't matter. What matters is that we do our best. It will work itself out. We aren't dumb people."* Followed, without changing register, by the sincere, un-ironic **"Our genetics are favorable."** — flat statement of calculated conclusion, lands funny to Phelan because Mere does not hear it as a joke. She already knows where the Drenwick court house is and what the filing requires: second floor, civil registry, counter two, six silvers, ten-day waiting period, hours second-afternoon-bell to seventh daily except Godsday — research done *"Last month. Before the case."* **Preparedness as love language.** Phelan: *"Okay. We'll go this week."* **Private decision: not shared with Devod, Leon, Carter, Carson, or Ledger in Book 2 per locked canon.** All reveals deferred to Book 3 | Relationship / decision / Thresholds closed |
 
+| Epilogue | **Legally married Day 28. Devod hugged on-page. Decision still private.** Morning at Chandler's Row, down after Phelan, does the kettle the way she always does the kettle, sits across from him, and neither of them says anything about it. *"Second afternoon bell." / "I know."* **At the civil registry counter:** produces her crown papers — older paper than Phelan's, crown seal darker with age, a single crease where she had folded it once and never unfolded since. Says *no* to existing joint contracts. Does not smile at the counter because the counter is theirs and the counter gets the flat version. Takes the clerk's copy of the filing. **On the stairs down from the court house, her hand goes into the crook of Phelan's elbow and stays there across the guild quarter and all the way back to Chandler's Row.** First on-page physical affection beat in the book that isn't Ch21's held-hands interior or the earlier bedside protocol. **At the wedding party — the Devod hug.** Meets Devod in the middle of the room before he can reach her and puts her arms around him "the way Mere put her arms around almost nobody." Holds him for a breath longer than Phelan expects. Steps back at the same moment without coordinating it. **No on-page use of "Dad" in this beat** — the word was spent privately in Ch11 and the hug now carries what the word used to carry. **Her quiet counter beat with Phelan** later in the evening: puts her hand in his where no one can see it, half a breath, no words. *"The filing was the room's. The rest of it was ours."* They smile at each other; nobody is looking. **Charlette absent from the party — Mere did not offer.** Thresholds partnership still reverted. **Day 29 dawn: asleep upstairs while Phelan walks out to find Ledger.** Legally married (contract effective Day 38). Privately still holding the Ch21 kitchen-table decision with Phelan; no on-page conversation about children since that night | Filing / Devod hug / privacy |
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 - [x] What are the legal/economic consequences when Mere eventually leaves? — **RESOLVED Ch21.** Mere did not leave; she won. Partnership reverted to the original deed (joint ownership, equal shares). Mere runs the floor, manages supply and treatment, and holds sole signing authority on any account she touches. Charlette and Devod split the books. Charlette was reclassified as "closed account" in Ch11 — now operative on paper. Thread closed.
 - [ ] When does Mere build out the moss-supply pipeline she flagged in Ch19? Velken's Drift access is already established through the guild — but the cultivation logistics are an open thread for Book 3
 - [ ] How does the Ch16 Misread (her brief sting interpreting Phelan's hyperfocus as something else) shape her communication protocol going forward? She's filed it as "a pattern to learn" — what does that look like in practice?
-- [ ] **When does the Drenwick court house filing happen?** Decision made Ch21 Day 18 evening. Phelan's on-page commitment: *"Okay. We'll go this week."* Filing window: Day 19–25 (within one week of the decision). Ten-day waiting period after filing before the civil contract takes legal effect → contract becomes active roughly Day 29–35. The filing itself may land in the Book 2 epilogue; the legal effect may land early Book 3. Mere will drive the calendar.
+- [x] **When does the Drenwick court house filing happen?** **RESOLVED Epilogue.** Filed Day 28 at counter two, second afternoon bell, fifteen past, six silvers on the counter. Crown papers presented and verified against the reference plate. Ten-day waiting period begins; contract takes legal effect Day 38. On-page ceremony minimal: name exchange, papers exchange, clause read, stamp lands. Neither of them smiled at the counter. First small physical affection beat (Mere's hand in Phelan's elbow) on the walk home.
 - [ ] **When and how does the pregnancy get revealed to Phelan?** Book 3 thread. Mere's "within the next year" line in Ch21 is a readiness window, not a deadline — she's scheduling, not panicking. The reveal itself has not been blocked out yet.