chapter 13 done, working on 14
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- Cass directed the attack from Thorngate (targeting Phelan's inner circle after Floundry witnesses)
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**Next (Day 12+):**
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- Ch13: Aftermath. Incompatible grief responses. Leon's guilt sharpens. Team debate on Kae.
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- Cass's operatives were due to report back Day 11 (established Ch08) — thread not addressed in Ch12, available for Ch13+
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- Ch14: Kae's full story revealed. Scene assessment. Ledger field collaboration.
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- Cass's operatives were due to report back Day 11 (established Ch08) — thread not addressed in Ch12 or Ch13, available for Ch14+
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## Ch13: The Weight of It — Detailed Timeline
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| Time | Bell | Event |
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| ~5:00-6:00 PM | ~Fifth-sixth bell | Chapter opens. Phelan has been in Devod's room two-three bells since arrival (~3:25 PM). Tanner and neighbor woman have departed. Room emptied of strangers. Mere cycling through stabilization compounds. |
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| ~6:00 PM | — | Leon arrives (Ledger sent word to Chandler's Row). Stops in doorway. Can't enter. |
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| ~6:30-7:00 PM | — | Mere discovers drain echo. Binding salts at left wrist darkening faster than other pulse points. "Something is still pulling." |
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| ~7:00-7:15 PM | — | Mere mixes concentrated binding salt compound. Applies to left wrist endpoint. Thirty seconds to a minute held. Fresh diagnostic salts hold color — pulling stopped. "Now his body can start." |
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| ~7:15-7:30 PM | — | Ledger has returned (appeared in corridor unannounced during treatment). Phelan steps into corridor. Team debate: Phelan's hunt instinct vs. strategic patience. Leon and Ledger argue Kae is evidence. Phelan concedes. Leon commits. Ledger: safe house prepared, medical contact by morning, resources "not limited to this situation." |
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| ~7:30 PM | — | Leon departs. Training off tomorrow. Phelan returns to Devod's room. Sits. Chapter ends. |
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**Key decisions made:**
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- Tomorrow (Day 12): Scene assessment at Devod's room, then build the case properly
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- Training cancelled Day 12
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- Ledger's safe house and medical resources formalized — available for Kae's eventual custody
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- Strategic approach: save Kae (evidence), don't hunt him
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