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 **Purpose:** Quick-reference continuity document for Claude Code. Consult this file at the start of any drafting or revision session to establish context without re-reading all chapter drafts. For detailed revisions or line-level continuity checks, consult the full chapter drafts directly.
 
-**Last updated:** Ch12 final (2026-03-24)
+**Last updated:** Ch13 final (2026-03-26)
 
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 | Ch10 | The Pivot | Day 10 (Tuesday equiv.) | Day 10 |
 | Ch11 | Thresholds | Day 10 evening (Tuesday equiv.) | Day 10 |
 | Ch12 | Devod | Day 11 (Wednesday equiv.) | Day 11 |
+| Ch13 | The Weight of It | Day 11 evening (Wednesday equiv.) | Day 11 |
 
 **Time gap from Book 1:** ~3 months after the epilogue. Deep winter → late winter.
 
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+### Ch13: The Weight of It
+
+**Timeline:** Day 11 evening (Wednesday equivalent). Continues directly from Ch12. ~Fifth bell through late evening. Devod's room, Millford Street.
+
+**Summary:** Three-scene chapter, ~3,000 words. Emotional aftermath of Devod's draining — the chapter sits in the weight instead of rushing past it.
+
+**Scene 1 — The Room (evening, Millford Street):** Opens in media res — Phelan has been in Devod's room for two-three bells. Tanner and neighbor woman have departed. Room has emptied of strangers. Devod's sustained wrongness: white temples, pale silver hair, slack skin, hands flat on the blanket. "He was fifty-five years old. He looked seventy." Mere works in continuous rhythm — pulse checks, compound adjustments, wrist/throat/temple cycle. Phelan watches her the way he watches magical workings: tracking structure underneath. Flaw Sight catches a faint, blurred presence around Devod — not a clean working, just a hum at the edge of perception ("like trying to read a word written in fog"). Leon arrives (Ledger sent word to Chandler's Row). Stops in the doorway. Can't come in. Sees what the crystal did. The room holds all of them in different kinds of silence.
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+**Scene 2 — The Discovery (Millford Street):** Mere's hands pause — Phelan catches the break in her rhythm after two and a half hours of calibrating to it. Binding salts at Devod's left wrist are darkening faster than other pulse points. Fresh salts darken again. "Something is still pulling." **Drain echo discovery:** The crystal's extraction should have ended on removal, but a residual channel endpoint remains open in Devod's system — pre-Compact architecture anchors channels, not just extracts. Crystal gone, wound still open. Phelan names it "a drain echo." Mere's treatment: concentrated binding salt compound (denser than standard) applied at the left wrist endpoint. Saturated application to smother the residual draw. Fresh diagnostic salts hold their color — the pulling has stopped. **Emotional beat:** Mere's hands stop moving for the first time in hours. "Now his body can start." Not celebration, not relief — but the worst fear has shifted. Empty can be filled.
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+**Scene 3 — The Corridor (Millford Street hallway):** Phelan steps out. Ledger has returned (appeared during the last hour without announcing himself). Leon beside him. Phelan's instinct surfaces: "I know where Kae sleeps" — cold, efficient task list (find Kae, remove crystal, remove Kae if necessary). Leon pushes back: "Kill him and we're back to chasing shadows." Ledger reinforces: Kae is evidence — knows Cass's operation, crystal locations, next targets. Phelan concedes ("Fine"). Leon's guilt crystallizes into commitment: "That crystal passed through my hands, Phelan. I sold it. Whatever we do next, I'm in it. That's not a request." Phelan reads the shift — guilt found a shape (commitment, not self-pity). Ledger provides institutional framework: safe house prepared, medical contact by morning (healer, life-force depletion experience, no Compact entanglements). "These resources aren't limited to this situation" — Phelan files this for Kae's eventual custody. Phelan: "Tomorrow. Scene assessment. Then we build this properly." Leon leaves (shoulder squeeze). Chapter ends: Phelan goes back into the room. Not to help. Not to solve. Just to sit. "The anger was still there — cold, patient, efficient. It would keep."
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+**Noise parentheticals:** 4 total. (1) Flaw Sight hum — faint, blurred presence around Devod, can't parse. (2) Blame math — Leon sold it, Harren to Galden to Cass to Kae to Devod. Doesn't distribute evenly. (3) Channel architecture — crystal anchors threads into vitality, pulling nail from wood, nail gone, hole isn't. (4) Already knew they were right — needed someone to say it so he could pretend he was persuaded. Devod wouldn't want that. Mere wouldn't forgive it.
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+**Sniff:** Still at Chandler's Row (not mentioned in chapter — established Ch12).
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 ## 3. Active Character Tracker
 
-| Character | Status at End of Ch12 | Last Seen |
+| Character | Status at End of Ch13 | Last Seen |
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-| Phelan Varrant | **Case became personal.** Bracelet manually charged to ~70% (push-charge discovery — costs concentration thread, more control/throughput than old auto-trickle). Received Carter's studded jacket (ore studs + impact-response leather). Watched Mere break into action after Devod's draining. Processing: "not a problem to solve, a debt to collect." Jacket at Chandler's Row, bracelet at 70%, Tier Two. | Ch12 |
-| Mere Fields | **Father drained — clinical fury activated.** Rushed to Millford Street in 8 minutes (normally 12). Took over Devod's care: herbal stabilization (temples, wrists, pulse points). "He's stable. Stable isn't good." Cut Phelan off — "Whatever you're about to say, I already know it. Say it later." Processing through action, not emotion. At Devod's bedside, working. | Ch12 |
-| Leon D'Nardis | **Training scene.** Helped Phelan discover manual bracelet charging ("Have you tried just pushing energy into it?"). Told Carter about the Kae fight off-page (processing guilt by arming Phelan's network). Present for training, not present for Devod discovery. | Ch12 |
-| Devod Fields | **DRAINED — life-threatening.** Attacked overnight/early morning Day 11 in his room above the tanner's shop, Millford Street. Found by tanner mid-morning. Aged: hair fully grey, skin slack, diminished, barely breathing. Same draining signature as other victims. Stabilized by Mere but critical. "Stable isn't good." Twelve hours after saying "Come by tomorrow, Dad." | Ch12 |
-| Sniff | At Chandler's Row, curled against Mere's feet. Left behind when they rushed to Millford Street. | Ch12 |
-| Ledger | **Crisis response — field mode.** Tried Chandler's Row first, closed their open door. Tier Two family member protocol. Assessed Devod's condition with too-specific clinical knowledge (Pathfinder seed). Half-second pause on "Devod Fields" — name means more than "delivery driver" (Pathfinder seed). Provided guild safe house, medical contacts (healer, life-force depletion). Used "Locksmith" alias. Ten minutes, departed. | Ch12 |
+| Phelan Varrant | **Anger held in check.** Instinct was to hunt Kae (cold task list, not rage) — Leon and Ledger talked him into strategic patience. Filed Ledger's safe house for Kae's eventual custody. Bracelet at 70%, holding. Sitting in Devod's room, present. "The anger was still there — cold, patient, efficient. It would keep." Tomorrow: scene assessment, then build the case properly. | Ch13 |
+| Mere Fields | **Drain echo neutralized.** Discovered residual channel endpoint via binding salt differential darkening at left wrist. Created concentrated binding salt compound to close the channel. "Now his body can start." Hands stopped for the first time in hours after treatment worked. Still at Devod's bedside. Processing through action — fear genuine but channeled into determination. Seeds later herbal treatment work (Kae pain management Ch19-21). | Ch13 |
+| Leon D'Nardis | **Guilt crystallized into commitment.** Arrived at Millford Street (Ledger sent word). Saw what the crystal did. Couldn't enter the room initially, moved inside during Mere's treatment. Pushed back on Phelan's hunt instinct: "Kill him and we're back to chasing shadows." Commitment: "That crystal passed through my hands. Whatever we do next, I'm in it. That's not a request." Training off tomorrow. | Ch13 |
+| Devod Fields | **DRAIN ECHO NEUTRALIZED — recovery can begin.** Residual channel endpoint from crystal closed by Mere's concentrated binding salt compound. Body no longer losing vitality. Battery drain model: vitality drained near-empty, capacity intact, 1-2 years of burned capacity permanent (will settle at 56-57). Recovery timeline: Ch14 (eyes open), Ch15 (conscious/talking), Ch16 (functional), Ch21 (recovered). Still unconscious, still at Millford Street. Hair white at temples, pale silver elsewhere. Looks seventy at fifty-five. | Ch13 |
+| Sniff | At Chandler's Row. Not mentioned in Ch13. | Ch12 |
+| Ledger | **Returned to Millford Street.** Appeared in corridor during Mere's treatment (unannounced — typical). Reinforced strategic argument: Kae is evidence. Safe house prepared, medical contact by morning (healer, life-force depletion, no Compact entanglements). "These resources aren't limited to this situation. They'll be available going forward." Institutional framework being laid for Kae's eventual custody. | Ch13 |
 | Carter (Jonael Carterson) | **Delivered studded jacket.** Ore studs (Velken's Drift, ~20% magical absorption) + impact-response leather (ore field bleeds into material, non-Newtonian behavior). Last adjustment after Leon told him about Kae fight. "If you're going to do something stupid, at least wear something I made." | Ch12 |
 | Cassius Rykhard | **First on-page appearance (voice via soundstone).** Furious that Kae has "gone off mission." Demands operatives find and redirect Kae. Rages about Phelan and "his team." Has "a plan to take care of this -- something more direct." Two field agents in the warrens operating under Compact cover. | Ch08 |
 | Harren | Artifact dealer, "Harren's Collected Antiquities," east side of arcane district. Sold crystal within a month of Leon's sale — to intermediary via broker Galden. Provided intermediary description and broker name under pressure from Leon. | Ch04 |
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 | House plans | Revision 10, east-facing kitchen. Question mark on workshop east wall (needs soil samples). Devod's integration concept (structure + drainage) filed for revision 11. | Ch01 |
 | Budget/finances | **UPDATED Ch10.** Retainer increased to 22 silvers/month (Tier Two). Surplus recalculation pending — house timeline drops by months. Both methods still kept. | Ch10 |
-| Fire combat training | **15 seconds** integrated casting (ugly, unstable, but holding). Up from 14 in Ch08. Key change still absorbing through instability. Training continues at sixth bell. Leon using Telessi sleeve. | Ch12 |
-| **Draining case (MAIN PLOT)** | **DEVOD TARGETED — CASE PERSONAL.** Cass pointed Kae at Devod Fields (overnight Day 10/11). Life-threatening draining. Same signature as all prior victims. Escalation from Floundry witnesses to Phelan's inner circle. Mere at Devod's bedside, stabilized but critical. Guild safe house and medical contacts available via Ledger. Phelan's shift: "not a problem to solve, a debt to collect." | Ch12 |
+| Fire combat training | **15 seconds** integrated casting (ugly, unstable, but holding). Up from 14 in Ch08. Key change still absorbing through instability. **Training off Day 12** (Phelan told Leon). Leon using Telessi sleeve. | Ch13 |
+| **Draining case (MAIN PLOT)** | **DRAIN ECHO NEUTRALIZED — STRATEGIC APPROACH CHOSEN.** Mere discovered residual channel endpoint in Devod (drain echo) and closed it with concentrated binding salts. Team debate: Phelan wanted to hunt Kae, Leon and Ledger argued Kae is evidence (knows Cass's operation, crystal locations, next targets). Phelan conceded. Tomorrow: scene assessment, then build the case properly. Guild safe house prepared, medical contact by morning. Ledger's resources "not limited to this situation" — framework for Kae's eventual custody. | Ch13 |
 | **Carter supply chain (B-PLOT)** | **RESOLVED.** Leon delivered three alternative suppliers outside Compact channels. Carter testing with small orders. Carson's rumour campaign ongoing (2-3 weeks, started Day 5). Carter mentioned non-standard materials project -- seeds studded jacket. Supply chain rebuilding, now Compact-resistant. | Ch07 |
 | Carter gear comment → jacket delivery | **PAID OFF Ch12.** Carter's Ch02 "professional negligence" comment about Phelan's wool coat seeds the studded jacket. Jacket delivered Ch12: ore studs (~20% magical absorption) + impact-response leather (ore field bleeds into material, non-Newtonian — soft normally, rigid on impact). One system, two effects. Leon told Carter about Kae fight → last adjustment for physical impact. "If you're going to do something stupid, at least wear something I made." | Ch12 |
 | Pathfinder seed #1 | Phelan's noise noted Ledger's network reach — warrens-level contacts, access to internal Compact documents. "How does a guild desk analyst have this?" Filed, not explored. | Ch02 |
 | Pathfinder seed #2 | Ledger's worn folder (predates draining case), personal investment in dead woman connected to Kae, intelligence reach continues to exceed desk analyst scope. | Ch04 |
-| Leon's guilt thread | Crystal he sold is killing people. Father's injury drove the cheap sale. Guilt boxed under operational competence — threw himself into investigation. Mere warns guilt will make him reckless. | Ch04 |
+| Leon's guilt thread | **CRYSTALLIZED INTO COMMITMENT Ch13.** Crystal he sold used on Devod. Guilt found a shape — not self-pity, commitment. "That crystal passed through my hands. Whatever we do next, I'm in it. That's not a request." Pushed back on Phelan's hunt instinct (sharper, not gentler). Training off Day 12. | Ch13 |
 | The Misread (Phelan-Mere) | **RESOLVED Ch05.** Mere noticed behavioral shift, asked why. Phelan admitted he heard criticism she didn't say. Mere's structural fix: "When it happens, ask." Phelan filed permanently: Mere's words are the complete message, no gap, no subtext. | Ch05 |
 | Leon — Telessi projection sleeve | Bought from Harren for 40 silvers. Third era, worn channels, +8-10ft fire range. Fire augmentation tool — jealous of Phelan's ring. | Ch04 |
 | Galden (broker lead) | Leon's pursuit complete. Financial trail: institutional money, Compact-level disbursement channels. Leon couldn't press further without making Galden nervous. Ledger's people taking over the financial side. | Ch07 |
 | Compact warrens inquiries | **RESOLVED -- Cass's field agents.** Misread corrected Ch08: not Compact damage control, but Cass's personal operatives working under Compact cover. Overheard reporting to Cass via soundstone. Can't find Kae, can't pressure Carter's new suppliers, can't stop Carson's rumour campaign. Cass furious. Report back in two days (Day 11). Leon following them after the split. | Ch08 |
 | Pathfinder seed #3 | Ledger's methodology questions about Phelan's investigative process go beyond management oversight — he's building a capability file, not just debriefing a case. | Ch05 |
 | Carson / Greywell Lane | **Puzzle piece delivered Ch07.** Kae's hypothetical dilemmas revealed -- Carson's "do what's best for you" advice became permission slip. Carson saw Kae two days before fish fry (Day 6), looking worse. Fish fry scene established the Church in practice (~20 people, community warmth). Carson doesn't yet understand the weight of what his advice enabled -- guilt arc seeded. Seeds Ch17 ("I got a buddy" for the approach). | Ch07 |
-| Devod's orbit | **ATTACKED Ch12.** Breakthrough in Ch11 (ultimatum truth, "Dad" moment) → drained overnight Day 10/11. Life-threatening. Aged, diminished, barely breathing. Mere stabilized but critical. At Millford Street room. Guild safe house available when stable enough to move. The rebuilt relationship shattered at the moment it became real. | Ch12 |
+| Devod's orbit | **DRAIN ECHO NEUTRALIZED Ch13.** Mere discovered residual channel endpoint and closed it — body can now rebuild. Battery drain model: vitality near-empty, capacity intact, 1-2 years permanent cost (55→56-57). Recovery: Ch14 (eyes open), Ch15 (conscious), Ch16 (functional), Ch21 (recovered). Still at Millford Street. Guild safe house available when stable enough to move. | Ch13 |
 | Devod's "protective non-investigation" | Key insight: if the Compact isn't investigating, someone told them not to. Follow the protection to find the connection. Crystallised the Cass/Thorngate thread in Phelan's noise — compliance officer reassigned to Thorngate, where Cass operates. Geography of institutional suppression pointing at a name. Not proof. | Ch06 (NEW) |
 | Higher-tier guild work | **TIER TWO (Ch10).** Phelan promoted: 22 silvers/month retainer, Archive access, intelligence priority, alias "The Locksmith" formalised in guild records. Complicated reaction — resources welcome, scrutiny not. The alias being documented makes anonymity harder. Ledger's "we believe in you" = pay raise + tighter leash. | Ch10 |
 | Charlette/Thresholds | **MAJOR UPDATE Ch11.** Devod brought Thresholds papers — deed (joint ownership, never transferred), partnership docs, and financial records revealing 4 years of extortion payments (3 silvers/month from Devod to Charlette, ages 12-16). Charlette lied to Mere about buying Devod out. Ultimatum revealed: Charlette threatened to disappear with Mere if Devod fought for anything. Mere reclassified Charlette as "closed account" — emotionally done. Reclassified Devod — model inverted, didn't leave, was forced out. **Shelved for the case** — Mere chose to delay the Thresholds fight (character growth). Three-way tactical collaboration on the exploit moves to Ch16. Papers on the kitchen table at Chandler's Row. | Ch11 |
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 | **Kae's pendant** | **NEW Ch09.** Small carved snake on a cord at Kae's throat. Frayed cord, carving worn smooth from handling. Something kept, not worn. Personal significance unknown to Phelan. Seeds Ch14 reveal (connection to Elara). | Ch09 (NEW) |
 | **Washing woman connection** | **CONFIRMED Ch09.** The Ch05 washing woman (early thirties, "Are you a healer?") was sheltering Kae in her ground-floor tenement unit. Her question was real need — calculating whether Phelan could help. Kae's location now burned; won't return. | Ch09 (NEW) |
 | **Kae combat profile** | **ESTABLISHED Ch09.** Crystal-enhanced strength (punches crack plaster, covers rooms in single strides). No training, no telegraph — pain decides, crystal executes. Unpredictable: can't read someone who doesn't know their own next move. Vulnerable to fire (acute thermal trauma registers — screams when whip hits). Crystal-enhanced pain tolerance isn't absolute — manages chronic pain, not acute burns. | Ch09 (NEW) |
-| **Leon's guilt — sharpened + Stay or Bolt** | Crystal now pointed at Floundry witnesses. Guilt escalated further. **Stay or Bolt (Ch10):** Leon had window to walk away. Stayed. Framed transactionally ("I know the crystal's signature"). Phelan sees through it — the reason is guilt, not expertise. Neither acknowledges it. | Ch10 |
+| **Leon's guilt — sharpened → committed** | **UPDATED Ch13.** Crystal used on Devod. Leon saw the result. Guilt evolved from boxed operational competence (Ch04) → stay-or-bolt (Ch10) → explicit commitment (Ch13). "Whatever we do next, I'm in it." Phelan reads: guilt found a shape — transactional commitment, not corrosive self-pity. Leon at his best. | Ch13 |
 | Victim death (merchants' quarter woman) | **Dead.** Previously "critical, healer giving even odds" (Ch04). Case is now murder. Ledger delivered the news Day 6. | Ch07 (NEW) |
 | Mere's dependency insight | Crystal provides complete relief after partial (Elara) then nothing. Withdrawal exponentially worse because Kae's baseline reset to zero. "You can't just stop him. You have to replace what the crystal provides." Reframes the entire case question. Seeds Mere's herbal treatment solution (Ch16+). | Ch07 (NEW) |
 | Kae's permission-seeking | Carson's puzzle piece: Kae brought hypothetical dilemmas, received "do what's best for you" as answer. Key insight -- Kae sought moral permission, not acting without conscience. A sociopath doesn't seek permission. Carson's guilt arc seeded (doesn't yet know the dilemmas were real). | Ch07 (NEW) |
 | Ledger probing Leon | Ledger asked about formalising Leon's work (consulting, contract). Phelan shut it down -- Leon treats institutional obligation as a physical allergy. Ledger filed that Leon only works through Leon. | Ch07 (NEW) |
+| **Drain echo / Devod recovery** | **NEW Ch13.** Mere discovered pre-Compact crystal leaves residual channel endpoint after removal (drain echo) — continues pulling vitality. Detected via binding salt differential darkening at left wrist. Neutralized with concentrated binding salt compound. Battery drain model: vitality near-empty, capacity intact. Two-phase treatment: (1) close echo (done), (2) restorative tonics (off-page Ch14-21). Permanent cost: 1-2 years. Seeds Mere's herbal expertise → Kae pain management (Ch19-21). | Ch13 (NEW) |
 | CH8 bridge seeds | **BOTH PAID OFF Ch08.** (1) Financial thread → Ledger's Cass confirmation + Elara informant reveal. (2) Compact operatives → tailed to storage facility, overheard reporting to Cass via soundstone. | Ch08 |
 | Soundstones | Leon loaned Phelan a paired soundstone (cave-diving kit). Half-mile range open air, less through heavy stone. Warm, walnut-sized, dark grey with opalescent sheen. Introduced through use during the tail. Cass's operatives also use soundstones (reported to Cass remotely). Ledger warned about frequency overlap risk. Used for Leon-Phelan coordination during Kae break-in (Ch09). | Ch09 |
 | Earth magic (vibration sensing) | Phelan used earth magic to sense movement through building walls -- palm flat against surface, feels vibrations/footsteps. Input side of earth brace (Book 1 Ch6). Limitation: general movement only, not individual identification. Works in empty buildings; **CONFIRMED Ch09: fails in packed residential buildings** — too many people, overlapping heartbeats/movement bury individual signals. | Ch09 |

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 - Cass directed the attack from Thorngate (targeting Phelan's inner circle after Floundry witnesses)
 
 **Next (Day 12+):**
-- Ch13: Aftermath. Incompatible grief responses. Leon's guilt sharpens. Team debate on Kae.
-- Cass's operatives were due to report back Day 11 (established Ch08) — thread not addressed in Ch12, available for Ch13+
+- Ch14: Kae's full story revealed. Scene assessment. Ledger field collaboration.
+- Cass's operatives were due to report back Day 11 (established Ch08) — thread not addressed in Ch12 or Ch13, available for Ch14+
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+## Ch13: The Weight of It — Detailed Timeline
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+| Time | Bell | Event |
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+| ~5:00-6:00 PM | ~Fifth-sixth bell | Chapter opens. Phelan has been in Devod's room two-three bells since arrival (~3:25 PM). Tanner and neighbor woman have departed. Room emptied of strangers. Mere cycling through stabilization compounds. |
+| ~6:00 PM | — | Leon arrives (Ledger sent word to Chandler's Row). Stops in doorway. Can't enter. |
+| ~6:30-7:00 PM | — | Mere discovers drain echo. Binding salts at left wrist darkening faster than other pulse points. "Something is still pulling." |
+| ~7:00-7:15 PM | — | Mere mixes concentrated binding salt compound. Applies to left wrist endpoint. Thirty seconds to a minute held. Fresh diagnostic salts hold color — pulling stopped. "Now his body can start." |
+| ~7:15-7:30 PM | — | Ledger has returned (appeared in corridor unannounced during treatment). Phelan steps into corridor. Team debate: Phelan's hunt instinct vs. strategic patience. Leon and Ledger argue Kae is evidence. Phelan concedes. Leon commits. Ledger: safe house prepared, medical contact by morning, resources "not limited to this situation." |
+| ~7:30 PM | — | Leon departs. Training off tomorrow. Phelan returns to Devod's room. Sits. Chapter ends. |
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+**Key decisions made:**
+- Tomorrow (Day 12): Scene assessment at Devod's room, then build the case properly
+- Training cancelled Day 12
+- Ledger's safe house and medical resources formalized — available for Kae's eventual custody
+- Strategic approach: save Kae (evidence), don't hunt him
 
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