book3: finalize Ch02 "The File" + Ch01 and continuity sweep

Ch02 drafted, reviewed, and finalized — ruin case brief, Compact
grievance reveal, grooming hint. Stage 5 continuity across story
summary, timeline, and character files (Phelan, Mere, Ledger, Devod,
Sabre, Holven). Bundles prior-session work: Ch01 final, crystal-drain-
echo series canon, WellsMoon moss hybrid artifacts, and spec cleanup.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.7 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
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2. **Weeks 16:** Scout 1 establishes surveillance, walks the perimeter, catalogs the three mine entrances, cross-references Devod's 20-year-old notes against current terrain. Working notes accumulate in his field journal. Cross-references accurate; survey still holds.
3. **~Week 6:** Scout 1 tries to force the gate. Ward adapts to his methodology and kills him. (Same mechanism as canonical "wards kill experienced operatives," relocated from the first chamber to the gate.) Final journal entry: a confident hypothesis about the ward's structure, followed by a gap.
4. **Weeks 614:** Silence from Scout 1. Ledger does not panic — long-duration scouts go quiet by protocol. But by week 14, silence is past threshold.
5. **~Week 14:** Ledger deploys **Sable + one Cairns forensics operative.** Two-person recovery team.
6. **Weeks 1416:** Sable and partner find Scout 1's body near the gate. No note. Field journal recovered. Partner reads the body: arcane burn pattern, positioning, defensive posture. Diagnoses pre-Compact adaptive ward. Confirms survey-era assessment is still correct.
7. **~Week 16:** Partner returns to Ledger with forensics report and the journal. Sable stays on rotation (holds the site lightly, sends sending-stone updates, awaits next team).
8. **~Week 17 (Book 3 Ch02):** Ledger briefs Phelan with the full file: 20-year-old survey (with Devod's notes), Scout 1's journal, forensics report, Sable's observations.
5. **~Week 14:** Ledger deploys **Sabre + one Cairns forensics operative.** Two-person recovery team.
6. **Weeks 1416:** Sabre and partner find Scout 1's body near the gate. No note. Field journal recovered. Partner reads the body: arcane burn pattern, positioning, defensive posture. Diagnoses pre-Compact adaptive ward. Confirms survey-era assessment is still correct.
7. **~Week 16:** Partner returns to Ledger with forensics report and the journal. Sabre stays on rotation (holds the site lightly, sends sending-stone updates, awaits next team).
8. **~Week 17 (Book 3 Ch02):** Ledger briefs Phelan with the full file: 20-year-old survey (with Devod's notes), Scout 1's journal, forensics report, Sabre's observations.
**Total elapsed: ~17 weeks / ~4 months** from Phelan's wedding to the Ch02 briefing. *The delay is competent operational caution, not drift.*
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- Scout 1's field journal — working notes, cross-references to Devod's survey, the final hypothesis about the gate ward, silence.
- Forensics partner's report — cause of death, kill mechanism, confirmation that the ward is still active and still lethal.
- Sable's ongoing site observations — terrain changes, mine-entrance status, weather, any sign of other visitors (none).
- Sabre's ongoing site observations — terrain changes, mine-entrance status, weather, any sign of other visitors (none).
### What Pamira Knows
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## 9. What the Team Brings to Ch08
Scout 1's journal is handed to Phelan in Ch07 — either by Pamira (she's been holding it for weeks) or by Sable (hands over in a briefing).
Scout 1's journal is handed to Phelan in Ch07 — either by Pamira (she's been holding it for weeks) or by Sabre (hands over in a briefing).
Phelan reads it overnight. He already has Devod's 20-year-old survey notes in the file. By morning, he's partway into the ward's logic — **not starting from zero, reading past a dead man's mistake to see what the scout missed.**
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### Core narrative files
- `outline/book3-outline.md`
- Core Case section — rewrite "How it enters the story" paragraph to match the new discovery mechanism (20-year survey, husband's wait, recent decision, Cairns → Ledger → scout deployment → Sable finds body).
- Core Case section — rewrite "How it enters the story" paragraph to match the new discovery mechanism (20-year survey, husband's wait, recent decision, Cairns → Ledger → scout deployment → Sabre finds body).
- Ch02 briefing — update Ledger's briefing language (no Wolf note, survey file + scout journal + forensics instead).
- Ch06 — add Sable-is-returning texture (he's been here before, knows the road, has seen Scout 1's body).
- Ch06 — add Sabre-is-returning texture (he's been here before, knows the road, has seen Scout 1's body).
- Ch07 — rewrite the Pamira-Devod meeting to use "I've read about you" / "That was your survey?" reveal instead of "A dead man."
- Ch08 — frame the gate as the first Flaw Sight showcase; Phelan already partway into the ward's logic from reading Scout 1's journal overnight.
- Ch09 or Ch11 — add two-paragraph private-voice Pamira-at-ledger scene naming Holven.
- Subplot thread map — Sable row gets a "returning to site" beat for Ch06.
- Subplot thread map — Sabre row gets a "returning to site" beat for Ch06.
- `characters/duchess-pamira.md`
- Backstory section — add the 20-year survey, the husband's wait-it-out guidance, the recent decision to reopen, the emotional weight of breaking from his guidance.
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- `characters/supporting-cast.md`
- Holven row — flesh out as named antagonist/rival for Book 3 texture + Book 4 setup.
- Sable row — add the "returning scout" context.
- Sabre row — add the "returning scout" context.
- `chapters/book3/CLAUDE.md`
- Core Case summary paragraph — rewrite to match the new discovery mechanism.