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### 2. Parenthetical Aside Format
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After the introduction, tangent passages are formatted as parenthetical asides:
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After the introduction, tangent passages are formatted as **italicized parenthetical asides** — italics inside parentheses to visually distinguish involuntary brain tangents from regular narrative asides:
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Regular narration here.
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(Short, clipped tangent thoughts. Sentence fragments. Rapid-fire observations.
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Raw brain output without social niceties or full prose. The noise made visible.)
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(*Short, clipped tangent thoughts. Sentence fragments. Rapid-fire observations.
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Raw brain output without social niceties or full prose. The noise made visible.*)
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Regular narration resumes, sometimes mid-action.
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```
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The `(*…*)` format works cleanly on Kindle and provides an immediate visual cue that this is "the noise" rather than a standard parenthetical.
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## Rules for Parentheticals
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### What qualifies:
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