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### Family
- **Mother (Charlette Fields):** Vindictive and controlling — not theatrically, but systematically. Weaponizes control the way other people use tools. Mere lives with her as of Book 1. The relationship is suffocating. Mere needs out.
- **Background:** Charlette's controlling nature is rooted in her guild-adjacent supply logistics career — she spent years managing logistics for Pathfinder operations where people died regularly. Risk assessment, contingency planning, resource control were professional assets. When she shifted that energy to family life, "managing risk" became "controlling everything and everyone." Competence that metastasized into something destructive.
- **Owns Thresholds.** Mere built the business — curated inventory, built clientele, designed systems — but her mother holds the deed. The shop is a leash disguised as an opportunity. Leaving means losing the shop.
- **Layered, escalating rules.** What Mere can do, where she can go, when she must be home. The workspace rearrangement (established Ch02) is just the visible surface. Underneath: income control (Mere's earnings taken as "household contribution"), schedule control, social control. Each rule reasonable-sounding in isolation, suffocating in aggregate.
- **Presents respectably.** The cruelty is behind closed doors. From outside, she looks like a concerned single mother managing a difficult daughter.
- **Father (Devod Fields):** Divorced from mother. Mere knows where he lives (Henwick's yard, Millford Street) but has no active relationship. **Mere believes Devod chose to leave when she was twelve.** She doesn't know the truth (see below).
- **Father (Devod Fields):** Divorced from mother. Mere knows where he lives (Henwick's yard, Millford Street) but has no active relationship. **Mere believes Devod chose to leave when she was twelve.** She doesn't know the truth (see below). **Note:** Mere knew about Devod's Pathfinder past since childhood (pre-ultimatum knowledge, ~age 12). It was just a fact about her father the way any child knows their parent's job. She never mentions it because (a) it wasn't relevant, and (b) Mere doesn't volunteer information unprompted — established character behavior.
- **The Ultimatum (when Mere was 12):** Mother told Devod — cut all contact with Mere, or I move us both somewhere you'll never find us. Devod had no legal standing (custody was hers). He complied — strategic choice, not cowardice. Calculated that Mere staying in Drenwick (near him, even if not with him) was better than Mere disappearing entirely. Has lived with the guilt for 12+ years. **Mere does not know this happened.** She thinks Devod walked away. Her disconnection from him is built on a lie she doesn't know is a lie.
- **Parents' divorce:** Mother's hatred of Devod is established. The ultimatum reveals the depth of it — she didn't just end the marriage, she weaponized the child.