# Design Spec: Book 2 Character Arc Development

**Date:** 2026-03-12
**Scope:** Devod Fields, Leon D'Nardis, Phelan Varrant — Book 2 emotional arcs
**Approach:** "Emotional Weather" — milestone beats + per-chapter temperature readings

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## Devod Fields — "The Door That Opens"

**Internal shift:** From *grateful to be tolerated* → *believing he belongs here*

Devod spent 12 years watching Mere's life from above a tanner's shop. Book 1 cracked the door open. Book 2 is about him cautiously stepping through it — and then having it nearly slammed shut by Kae's attack at the exact moment he started to believe it would stay open.

### Milestone Beats

**Beat 1 (Ch 1-4): The Awkward Orbit**
Devod is *around* — showing up with ideas, helping where he can, but still treating every interaction with Mere like borrowed time. He over-explains, over-contributes, tries too hard. Mere notices and finds it exhausting but doesn't push him away. The reader sees a man who doesn't believe the door will stay open.

**Beat 2 (Ch 13): The Breakthrough**
The Thresholds chapter. Working together on the Charlette problem forces them into genuine collaboration — not father-helping-daughter or daughter-tolerating-father, but two people with complementary skills solving a problem. Devod stops performing gratitude and starts being *useful*. Mere's blunt feedback ("That idea is terrible. What's the next one?") is the first time someone treats him like a normal person rather than a returning prodigal. He relaxes. She notices.

**Beat 3 (Ch 14): The Door Slams**
Kae drains Devod at the exact moment the relationship was becoming real. This isn't just an attack on a supporting character — it's the destruction of something fragile that was just starting to work. The emotional weight comes from what the reader watched building in Ch 1-13.

**Beat 4 (Ch 18): The Idea From the Bed**
Devod contributes his "one genius idea" from recovery. But the real beat is *how* — he doesn't perform or over-explain. He just says it. Quietly. Like someone who now believes he'll be heard. Mere's reaction is the tell: she doesn't praise or acknowledge the shift, she just *uses* the idea, which is Mere's version of trust.

### Chapter Temperature Readings

| Ch | Devod's Emotional State |
|---|---|
| 1 | Present but peripheral. Helping with house plans (has opinions about foundations). Grateful energy. |
| 2-3 | Hovering. Drops by Chandler's Row with food, ideas, excuses to visit. Mere tolerates it. |
| 4-5 | Starting to relax slightly. A shared laugh over something practical. Still tentative. |
| 6-8 | More natural. Offers case ideas (mostly bad, one useful). Mere stops bristling at his presence. |
| 9-10 | Comfortable enough to disagree with Mere about something small. She respects it. Quiet milestone. |
| 11-12 | Settled into routine. Present but unremarked -- the normalcy that makes Ch 14 devastating. |
| 13 | **Breakthrough.** Thresholds collaboration. Stops performing, starts belonging. |
| 14 | **Attacked.** Everything that was building gets shattered in one moment. |
| 15 | Unconscious/recovering. His absence is the loudest thing in the chapter. Mere at bedside. Leon at bedside — the intersection moment. |
| 16-17 | Off-page recovery. His absence weighs on Mere and Phelan differently. |
| 18 | Lucid enough to contribute. The quiet idea. Changed demeanor — less scattered, more grounded. |
| 23-24 | Recovery continuing. The relationship with Mere is different now — tested, not just tentative. Neither of them names it. |

### Critical Design Choice
The gradual reconnection between Mere and Devod MUST land before the attack (Ch 14). If the reader hasn't watched this relationship cautiously rebuild through Ch 1-13, the attack is just plot mechanics. The emotional weight comes from watching something fragile get shattered at its most vulnerable moment.

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## Leon D'Nardis — "The Freelancer's Leash"

**Internal shift:** From *independence as identity* → *accepting that freedom has a price tag he's been ignoring*

Leon's arc has two engines pulling in opposite directions. The guilt thread (his crystal sale enabled Kae's weapon) is yanking him *toward* the team — he owes this, he has to help fix it. But his freelance identity (no guild, no commitments, always one foot out the door) is pulling him *away*. Book 2 is about Leon discovering that "no strings attached" was always an illusion — he just wasn't looking at the strings.

### Milestone Beats

**Beat 1 (Ch 4): The Recognition**
Leon identifies the crystal. The moment he realizes what he sold and what it became. He doesn't break down — that's not Leon. He gets quiet. Then he gets operational. "Let me help trace the buyer." The guilt manifests as hyper-competence — if he can fix this, he doesn't have to feel it.

**Beat 2 (Ch 12): The Stay-or-Bolt Moment**
When the case shifts from "random addict" to "Cass targeting Phelan's network," Leon has a window to walk away. This isn't his guild, these aren't his people, and staying means becoming a target. He stays — but he frames it transactionally ("I know the crystal's signature better than anyone, you need me"). Phelan sees through this. Neither acknowledges it.

**Beat 3 (Ch 15): The Bedside — Intersection Moment**
Leon at Devod's bedside. This is where the guilt stops being abstract ("I sold a thing to a bad person") and becomes concrete ("that thing did *this* to *this person*"). Leon's operational mask slips for exactly one moment. He covers it fast. Phelan notices but says nothing — this is the kind of thing they don't discuss. Devod doesn't even know Leon is the link. Leon does.

**Beat 4 (Ch 21): Cover Fire**
During the crystal break, Leon provides cover while Phelan is vulnerable. This is the first time Leon has put himself at physical risk for someone else's plan, someone else's call. He's not freelancing — he's *serving*. He'd hate that word. He does it anyway.

**Beat 5 (Ch 23): The New Philosophy**
Leon's "don't ask who's buying" becomes something harder. Not a dramatic speech — a quiet conversation with Phelan. Maybe while drinking. He doesn't swear off grey-market work. He doesn't join the guild. But he starts *asking*. One question per sale. Who's buying. That's the change — small, permanent, and costly to his business model.

### Chapter Temperature Readings

| Ch | Leon's Emotional State |
|---|---|
| 1 | Comfortable. Training with Phelan. The easy rhythm of a transactional friendship that's secretly becoming real. |
| 4 | **Recognition.** Quiet shock, then operational pivot. Guilt buried under competence. |
| 5 | Guilt deepens as the crystal connection solidifies. Throws himself into tracing the buyer. |
| 6-8 | Increasingly invested. Tells himself it's professional — cleaning up his own mess. |
| 9 | Connecting dots to Cass. The anger is easier than the guilt. He holds onto it. |
| 10 | Watches Phelan's first encounter with Kae. Sees the human wreckage his sale contributed to. |
| 12 | **Stay or bolt.** Chooses to stay. Rationalizes it. Phelan lets him. |
| 14 | Devod attacked. Leon goes cold. Combat-ready. The guilt is a weapon now — channeled into "fix this." |
| 15 | **Bedside.** Mask slips. Recovers. Changed underneath. |
| 18 | All business. Planning the approach. But he volunteers for the dangerous position without being asked. |
| 20-21 | **Cover fire.** Serving someone else's plan. Hates it. Does it perfectly. |
| 23 | **New philosophy.** The quiet conversation. One question per sale. Small change, real cost. |

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## Phelan Varrant — "Two Systems, One House"

**Internal shift:** From *coexisting with Mere* → *building something with her* (and recognizing these are different things)

Phelan has lived alone his entire adult life. Now there's a person in his space who is simultaneously the most compatible and most baffling human he's ever encountered. They think the same way but arrive through completely different logic. They want the same things but can't explain why to each other. The domestic arc isn't a subplot — it's the emotional spine that makes the Kae case land, because Kae is what happens when you never let anyone close enough to misunderstand you.

### The Core Dynamic: Yin-Yang Misfire

Mere says exactly what she means. Phelan hears what people *really* mean. When those two systems collide with someone who *actually means what she says*, the result is:

- Phelan reading subtext that isn't there
- Mere not understanding why he's reacting to something she didn't say
- Both arriving at the same conclusion via incompatible methods
- Brief friction → confused resolution → slightly stronger foundation

These misunderstandings should range from **hilarious** (the budget math) to **quietly painful** (a moment where Phelan's over-reading causes a real rift that takes a day to heal).

### Milestone Beats

**Beat 1 (Ch 1): The Budget Math**
Domestic life established. Mere has done the household budget. Phelan looks at her method — it's unfamiliar, the logic path is completely different from how he'd approach it. His noise kicks in. He can't let it go. He redoes the entire thing his way. Hours later, same number. Mere: "I told you." Phelan: stunned silence, then grudging respect. First lesson: *different method, same answer* is going to be the pattern of this relationship.

**Beat 2 (Ch 5-6): The Misread**
Mere says something blunt about the case or their living situation. Phelan, who reads everyone as a system of hidden motivations, interprets it as criticism or distance. He adjusts his behavior based on what he thinks she meant. Mere doesn't notice for a day. When she does notice he's acting differently, she asks why. He explains what he heard. She's baffled: "I said [exact words]. That's what I meant." A brief, uncomfortable rift — not a fight, because neither of them fights that way. More like two machines that briefly desynchronized. They recalibrate. Phelan files away: *Mere is the one person whose words are the whole message.*

**Beat 3 (Ch 13-14): The Reversal**
For once, Mere misreads *Phelan*. She interprets his cold-reader silence during a tense moment as agreement or indifference, when he's actually processing something important about the case (or about Devod). Her bluntness about what she thinks he's thinking is wrong for the first time. This matters because it proves the communication isn't one-directional — they're both learning to read a system they've never encountered before. Phelan's reaction: quiet surprise that someone got *him* wrong. He's not used to being misread.

**Beat 4 (Ch 15): The Crack**
After Devod's attack, the domestic equilibrium breaks. Mere processes through action (bedside research). Phelan processes through cold efficiency (hunt Kae). They're both dealing with the same grief and fury but in incompatible ways. This is the most serious rift — not a misunderstanding but a genuine conflict of approach. They don't resolve it in this chapter. The unresolved tension sits between them while they work.

**Beat 5 (Ch 22-24): The New Math**
After the case resolves, the domestic life resumes — but differently. The house plans have advanced (what revision?). The budget method has become a blend: Mere's structure, Phelan's edge-case paranoia, somehow working. They've stopped trying to translate each other and started building a shared language. Phelan won't name this. The reader will.

### Chapter Temperature Readings

| Ch | Phelan's Domestic State |
|---|---|
| 1 | Content but restless. The quiet is good. The quiet is suspicious. House plans, budget math, the comedy of two analytical minds sharing a kitchen. |
| 2-3 | Case pulls focus. Mere gives him space (she understands hyper-focus). Domestic life continues in background — meals, routines, the small negotiations of shared space. |
| 4 | Leon's guilt discovery stirs something. Phelan notices he's *telling Mere about the case* without being asked. This is new. He doesn't examine why. |
| 5-6 | **The Misread.** Brief desync. Recalibration. Phelan learns something he'll keep learning all book: she means what she says. |
| 7-9 | Case intensifying. Domestic rhythms become anchoring — the thing he comes back to. Mere's blunt observations about the case are occasionally brilliant in ways that annoy him. |
| 10 | After first contact with Kae, Phelan comes home shaken (won't admit it). Mere reads his silence correctly this time. Doesn't push. Makes tea. He notices. |
| 13 | **The Reversal.** Mere misreads him. Both surprised. New data point in the ongoing relationship calibration. |
| 14 | Devod attacked. Domestic equilibrium shattered. |
| 15 | **The Crack.** Incompatible grief responses. Unresolved tension. The house feels different. |
| 16-17 | Working in parallel, not together. The rift isn't hostile — they're just in different processing modes. Mere is at Devod's bedside researching. Phelan is hunting. They pass each other. |
| 18 | Planning the impossible solution brings them back into alignment. Mere's research + Phelan's Flaw Sight = the plan. Working together heals what talking couldn't. |
| 20-22 | The case execution. Mere's herbal treatment is essential. Phelan trusts her with Kae's survival. This is the domestic arc paying off — he trusts her competence completely. No hesitation. |
| 23-24 | **The New Math.** Earned quiet. The house plans continue. The shared language is forming. Phelan won't say what this is. The reader knows. |

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## The Intersection Moment: Leon at Devod's Bedside (Ch 15)

This is where Leon's guilt thread and Devod's arc physically collide. Leon sees the man drained by the crystal *he sold*. The guilt stops being abstract and becomes a person in a bed.

**Key details:**
- Leon doesn't say much — he's not the type
- Devod doesn't know Leon is the link between the crystal and his condition
- Leon does know, and that knowledge changes him
- Phelan witnesses this but doesn't intervene — this is the kind of thing they don't discuss
- This moment is the hinge that makes Leon's later decisions (cover fire in Ch 21, new philosophy in Ch 23) feel earned rather than sudden

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## Arc Interaction Map

| Chapter | Devod | Leon | Phelan (domestic) |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Peripheral, grateful | Comfortable, training | Budget math comedy |
| 4 | Relaxing slightly | **Crystal recognition** | Telling Mere about the case |
| 5-6 | Natural | Guilt deepening | **The Misread** |
| 12 | — | **Stay or bolt** | — |
| 13 | **Breakthrough** | — | **The Reversal** |
| 14 | **Attacked** | Goes cold | Equilibrium shattered |
| 15 | Absent (recovering) | **Bedside intersection** | **The Crack** |
| 18 | **Quiet idea** | Volunteers for danger | Realignment through work |
| 21 | — | **Cover fire** | Trusts Mere completely |
| 23 | Testing new relationship | **New philosophy** | **The New Math** |
