# Design Spec: Ch12 "Devod" — Bracelet Charging, Jacket Delivery, Attack Discovery

**Date:** 2026-03-24
**Status:** Approved
**Scope:** Full chapter design — four scenes

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## Context

Ch 11 rebuilt the Mere-Devod relationship: ultimatum truth revealed, Mere reclassified both parents, called Devod "Dad" for the first time in twelve years, and consciously shelved the Thresholds fight to prioritize the case. The chapter ended with the bracelet dim at half-charge on Phelan's wrist.

Ch 12 shatters the rebuilt relationship by having Cass point Kae at Devod. This chapter also establishes two mechanical payoffs for Ch 18-19: the bracelet's manual charging method and Carter's studded jacket with its impact-response leather.

**Timing:** The attack occurs roughly one day after Ch 11. Devod is found by neighbors/contacts and word reaches Chandler's Row.

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## Four-Scene Structure

### Scene 1: Training — The Charge (Leon + Phelan)

**Purpose:** Establish the manual bracelet charging mechanic. Good rhythm, banter, competence.

Fire combat training continues (the ongoing rhythm from the epilogue forward). During a break or cooldown, Leon notices the bracelet's dim state and asks: "Have you tried charging it manually?" Phelan hasn't. Both land on something like "no time like the present" simultaneously — the brain-feeding dynamic in action.

**The mechanic:**
- Phelan discovers he can push energy into the bracelet deliberately — a conscious feed rather than passive trickle
- It costs a dedicated thread of concentration (like maintaining a background spell). He has to actively sustain the flow
- **Trade-off:** Slower than the old auto-trickle because it requires conscious effort — but he can dump much more energy at once. The old system was a drip; manual mode is opening a sluice gate
- He tops the bracelet from ~50% to ~70% during the scene. Feels the cost — it's not free, it's effort
- The stone color shifts: dim amber deepens toward warm amber-red but doesn't reach full
- **Implication:** He can top it off faster if willing to dedicate mental bandwidth, but can't just forget about it anymore. One more thing to manage.

**Analogy direction:** World-appropriate — filling a reservoir via hand-pump vs. waiting for rain, or priming a mill sluice vs. letting the stream trickle. NOT car/gas station.

**Seeds:** This mechanic pays off in Ch 18-19 when Phelan needs the bracelet at full capacity for the crystal confrontation.

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### Scene 2: The Jacket (Carter visit)

**Purpose:** Deliver Carter's studded jacket — payoff from Ch 2-3 gear comment setup and Book 1 ore gift.

Carter arrives at Chandler's Row carrying the jacket. Reference: Leon told him about the Kae fight (Ch 9 — crystal drain, fire rescue, bracelet flare).

**The jacket's history:**
- Carter had been designing it since receiving the eight pieces of master-grade saturated ore in Book 1 Ch21
- Ore studs placed at hem, cuffs, and collar — strategic coverage
- The Ch 2-3 comment about Phelan's lack of protective gear was Carter already thinking about this
- After Leon described the Kae fight, Carter made one last adjustment

**Two-layer protection, one system:**
1. **Ore studs:** ~20% passive magical damage absorption (established capability of the saturated ore)
2. **Impact-response leather:** The ore studs' passive field bleeds into the surrounding leather, creating a non-Newtonian effect. Slow movements = soft, supple leather. Fast/hard impacts = leather locks rigid like armor plate. Carter discovered this property while testing stud placement — the ore's magical field extends slightly beyond the metal into adjacent material.

**Demonstration:** Carter shows the effect physically. Slow press on the leather — nothing, just soft material. Sharp slap — the leather goes hard under his hand. The contrast is dramatic.

**Key line:** "If you're going to do something stupid, at least wear something I made."

**Phelan's read:** His noise recognizes master-grade craftsmanship. This isn't just armor — it's an elegant engineering solution. Two effects from one system. Carter-level problem-solving.

**Seeds:** The jacket's physical protection pays off in Ch 18 during the Kae confrontation (absorbs hits that would otherwise take Phelan out of the fight).

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### Scene 3: The Quiet (brief transitional beat)

**Purpose:** Build atmospheric dread. The calm before the storm.

A window of normalcy after Carter leaves. Devod was expected at Chandler's Row — the new rhythm established in Ch 11. Maybe continuing conversation about the Thresholds papers, or just the regular visit that's become routine.

He doesn't show. Mere notices first — she's tracking the new relationship carefully, even if she won't vocalize it. Time passes. The absence accumulates weight.

Phelan's noise starts running scenarios he doesn't want to run. Given the case, given the pattern of victims, given that Cass has been targeting people connected to Phelan's network... the noise does the math before Phelan's conscious mind catches up.

**Tone:** Atmospheric, not stated. The dread lives in the silence and in Phelan's involuntary processing.

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### Scene 4: The News / Rush to Devod

**Purpose:** The gut-punch. Case becomes personal. Mere activated as fierce participant.

**The discovery:**
- Someone arrives at Chandler's Row with news — the tanner from below Devod's room (knows his routines, noticed something wrong), or a delivery route contact
- Devod was found drained: aged, weakened, the signature marks consistent with the case's victim pattern
- Life-threatening condition. Touch and go.

**Mere's reaction:**
- Clinical composure holds for approximately three seconds
- Cracks into fierce forward motion — not breakdown, but action. This is established Mere behavior (processes through doing, not feeling)
- She takes over. Her domain (herbalism, medical knowledge), her father, her fight
- The emotional detachment that's been her armor since childhood fractures under the one attachment she's just rebuilt

**Phelan's processing:**
- The case targeted his people. This is no longer professional.
- His instinct is cold efficiency (hunt Kae, end it) — but that's Ch 13's territory
- For now: shock, the noise running tactical calculations he hasn't authorized, and watching Mere break into motion

**Ledger crisis response (within this scene):**
- Arrives during or shortly after Phelan and Mere reach Devod
- **Justification:** Guild protocol — Tier Two operative's family member attacked triggers automatic guild response. The guild intelligence network picked up the draining incident independently (not Phelan's call)
- **Brief and functional:** Provides resources (safe house access, medical contacts). Assesses the damage with too-precise clinical knowledge
- **Single beat:** His reaction to the name "Devod Fields" carries recognition that doesn't match "delivery driver's father." Something in his assessment is too specific, too controlled. (Pathfinder reputation knowledge — seeds Ch 15, NOT stated)
- **Reads the room:** Notes the Phelan-Mere tension. Does not compete with the emotional beats — Ledger is infrastructure in this scene, not focus
- **Drafting note:** Ledger's presence should be 5-10% of the scene. He provides resources and exits. The Devod-name reaction is one line or beat, not a subplot.

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## Key Mechanics Summary

| Mechanic | Details | Pays Off |
|----------|---------|----------|
| Bracelet manual charge | Conscious push, costs concentration thread, slower but higher capacity per push. ~50% → ~70% | Ch 18-19 (needs full charge for crystal confrontation) |
| Jacket ore studs | ~20% passive magical damage absorption at hem/cuffs/collar | Ch 18 (absorbs hits during Kae fight) |
| Jacket impact leather | Ore field bleeds into leather, non-Newtonian response (soft normally, rigid on impact) | Ch 18 (physical protection during combat) |
| Attack timing | ~1 day after Ch 11 rebuild | Maximizes emotional devastation |

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## What This Chapter Accomplishes

- Bracelet charging mechanic established (Leon + Phelan discovery)
- Jacket delivered and demonstrated (Carter craftsmanship payoff)
- Case becomes personal — Phelan's network is now a target
- Mere shifts from supporting role to active, fierce participant
- Ledger crisis response seeds guild resources (safe house, medical) for later use
- The Ch 11 emotional investment in Devod makes the attack devastating
- Sets up Ch 13 (emotional aftermath, incompatible grief responses)

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## Continuity Notes

- Bracelet state: half-charged (Ch 9-10 established), auto-recharge broken (Ch 10 revelation), Devod's "wagon" idea seeded manual concept (Ch 10)
- Jacket: ore from Book 1 Ch 21, gear comment from Ch 2-3, Leon told Carter about Kae fight (Ch 9)
- Devod location: room above tanner's shop on Millford Street
- Mere called Devod "Dad" for first time in Ch 11 — this is fresh and makes the attack timing brutal
- Ledger's Tier Two promotion was Ch 10 — guild protocol for family member attack is new but consistent with institutional escalation
