# Design Spec: Chapter 10 — "The Pivot"

**Date:** 2026-03-23
**Status:** Draft
**Scope:** Chapter input file design for Book 2, Chapter 10

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## Overview

Chapter 10 is the hinge between Phase 1 (investigation, Chapters 1-9) and Phase 2 (personal stakes, Chapters 10-15). The existing outline is a single paragraph covering Cass's weaponization of Kae, the Floundry victim pattern shift, the Tier Two promotion, and the case reframing. This spec expands that into five scenes with full character beats.

**Timeline:** Day 10 (Tuesday equivalent). Full day: morning through evening.

**Location:** Entirely at Chandler's Row. The war comes to Phelan's home.

**Structural approach:** Five scenes, three emotional movements. The bracelet thread bookends the chapter — opens on silence (loss), closes on hope (Devod's wagon idea).

**New element not in original outline:** The bracelet's auto-recharge is gone. Phelan believes the bracelet is dying — half power left, then nothing. He doesn't know he can manually push energy into it. Devod's offhand wagon analogy in Scene 5 plants the solution.

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## Scene Structure

### Scene 1 — "The Silence" (Morning, bedroom)

**Purpose:** Establish the bracelet's new status and deliver the chapter's emotional gut-punch opening.

**Beats:**
- Phelan wakes, reaches for the bracelet's familiar background hum. Nothing. The warm amber pulse is dim, tired.
- He tests the reservoir: roughly half of what it held before the fight with Kae. The automatic recharge cycle — the subtle draw that kept it topped off — is gone. Not low. Gone.
- Phelan's understanding: the bracelet spent half its power saving his life. The auto-recharge broke in the process. What's left is what's left. When it's spent, it's gone.
- His most valuable tool — Flaw Sight amplification, reserve management, drain absorption — is now on a countdown. He doesn't know how many uses he has left.
- The panic is quiet and private. He doesn't tell anyone immediately.

**Critical constraint:** Phelan does NOT think about manually charging the bracelet. He's spiraling on the architectural loss — his ADD brain is processing the complexity of what broke, not considering a simple mechanical workaround. That's Devod's job in Scene 5.

**Noise parentheticals:** High frequency. Processing the loss, spiraling through implications, cataloguing what the bracelet has done for him and what losing it means.

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### Scene 2 — "Cross-Reference" (Morning, kitchen)

**Purpose:** Showcase Mere's analytical competence and deliver tactical intelligence.

**Thread A — Kae Behavioral Profile:**
- Fire vulnerability confirmed (thermal trauma registers despite crystal-enhanced pain tolerance)
- Pain-driven combat: no training, no telegraphing, unpredictable because pain decides, not tactics
- Dependency escalation curve: each drain gives less relief, requires more frequent and deeper draining
- Cognitive deterioration timeline: Kae is getting worse, not better. The addiction is eating his decision-making
- Tactical conclusion: time is both an ally (mental deterioration) and an enemy (increasing desperation and violence)

**Thread B — Bracelet/Crystal Interaction:**
- Mere flags something from Phelan's account: the bracelet *recognized* the crystal's attack pattern. Pre-Compact engineering responding to a Mallory artifact as if it knew what it was dealing with.
- Her question (not an answer): do these artifacts share architectural roots? If the bracelet can recognize the crystal's drain signature, that's compatibility, not coincidence.
- Seeds the Ch18-19 exploit work without resolving anything here. Mere plants the question; the noise will find it later.

**Leon present:** Contributing tactical observations from the Ch9 fight — Kae's movement patterns, room layout, escape route. Operational debrief energy.

**Character note:** Mere is an analyst, not a caretaker. She delivers this like a research report. Clinical, precise, cross-referenced.

**Noise parentheticals:** Analytical. Cross-referencing Mere's data against his own observations. The noise is working WITH her, not against her.

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### Scene 3 — "Tier Two" (Late morning, Ledger arrives)

**Purpose:** Deliver the Tier Two promotion woven into the Floundry victim intelligence as one package.

**Beats:**
- Ledger at the door of Chandler's Row. Coming to Phelan rather than summoning him — signals urgency.
- The promotion as delivery mechanism: "You're Tier Two now. Archive access, intelligence priority, higher retainer. Your alias is formalized. Here's your first intelligence briefing."
- Phelan's reaction: complicated. Money helps the house, Archive access helps the case, but the scrutiny is exactly what he's been avoiding. The guild knows more about The Locksmith than Phelan is comfortable with. Ledger's "we believe in you" is a pay raise and a tighter leash.
- Without pause, the Floundry victims:
  - Calla Floundry. Drained. Survived, but badly weakened.
  - Ned Floundry. Drained. Still recovering from the curse Phelan broke months ago. A life-force drain on top of that recovery — his body doesn't have the reserves. Touch and go. May not survive.
- The pattern: both connected to the Floundry case. Both witnesses to Compact corruption. Hit in sequence.
- Phelan's realization: Cass's "plan to take care of this" (overheard in Ch8) wasn't about reining Kae in — it was about *redirecting* him. Weaponizing the addiction against specific targets.
- Stakes escalation: Phelan's entire Floundry case network is at risk. Carter, Leon, anyone who testified or provided evidence. This is directed retaliation.

**Reactions:** Mere's face goes still (processing mode). Leon's jaw tightens — the crystal passed through his hands.

**Ned's condition:** Frame as genuinely life-threatening. The curse recovery was already taxing his body. A drain on top of that — reserves depleted twice over. This should feel like Cass is finishing what the curse started.

**Noise parentheticals:** Sharp. Cold-reading Ledger's delivery, processing the Floundry hits, running the network map of who else is at risk.

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### Scene 4 — "No Good Options" (Afternoon)

**Purpose:** Show the defense vs. pursuit tension without false resolution. Leon's "Stay or Bolt" beat.

**Beats:**
- Phelan and Leon after Ledger leaves.
- Defense argument: Protect remaining Floundry witnesses. Warn them. Move them. But they don't have the manpower, and Cass has Compact resources. Can't guard everyone simultaneously.
- Pursuit argument: Find Kae, end the draining. But Kae vanished into the warrens after Ch9. No lead. The washing woman's tenement is blown.
- **The debate doesn't resolve.** Neither option is actionable. They can warn people (and will), but can't guarantee safety. They can search (and will), but have no lead. Frustrated helplessness.
- **Leon's "Stay or Bolt":** The case has shifted to "Cass targeting Phelan's network." Leon has a window to walk away — crystal connection puts a target on his back too. He stays. Frames it transactionally: "I know the crystal's signature better than anyone. You need me." Phelan sees through it. Neither acknowledges it.
- **Leon's guilt:** Sharp, brief, shelved under operational pragmatism. The crystal he sold is being used to drain the people Phelan saved. Classic Leon — the emotion is real, the lid goes on fast.

**Noise parentheticals:** Frustrated. Running defense scenarios that don't work, pursuit scenarios that dead-end. The noise is spinning without traction.

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### Scene 5 — "The Wagon" (Evening, Devod arrives)

**Purpose:** Comic relief, Devod's genius idea, bracelet bookend, Ch12 setup.

**Beats:**
- Devod shows up. The chapter needs this after the weight of Scenes 3-4.
- Bad ideas cascade (classic Devod):
  - A trap using a decoy crystal ("Where would I get a decoy crystal, Devod?")
  - Network of warrens informants (already tried, Kae moves unpredictably)
  - Trained dogs tracking the crystal's magical signature (not how magic works)
  - Other increasingly impractical suggestions — brain generating at full speed with imperfect filters
- **The genius idea:** Phelan absently turning the bracelet, mentions the auto-recharge is broken. Half power left. When it's gone, it's gone.
- Devod, mid-thought about something else: "Well, if it won't pull, maybe you can push. Like when you get a wagon stuck."
- Beat of silence. Phelan looks at the bracelet.
- The auto-recharge *pulled* energy passively. That mechanism is broken. But what if he *pushed* energy in manually? Like charging the ring. The reservoir is still there — the intake mechanism just stopped working automatically. Doesn't mean the intake is sealed.
- He doesn't test it this scene (save for later). But the idea lands. The bracelet might not be dying after all. It's just... manual now.
- Devod doesn't realize what he's said. Moves on to his next bad idea. Everyone else in the room knows.

**Tone:** Warm. Funny. The chapter exhales. Devod being Devod — nine bad ideas and one that changes everything.

**Why this ending matters for Ch12:** The reader closes Ch10 liking Devod, grateful for his presence, smiling. Then Ch11 (Thresholds) shifts focus. Then Ch12 — Cass points Kae at Devod. The emotional whiplash across three chapters is devastating.

**Devod voice note:** His bad ideas should be funny but not stupid. They show a brain generating at full speed with imperfect filters. The reader laughs WITH him, not AT him. He knows most of his ideas are bad — he also knows the one good one is worth the others.

**Noise parentheticals:** Quieter. The noise settles when Devod talks — partly because Devod's chaotic energy matches the noise's rhythm, partly because the idea landing creates a moment of clarity.

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## Emotional Arc

Loss → Competence → Escalation → Frustration → Warmth

| Scene | Emotion | Energy |
|---|---|---|
| 1. The Silence | Private devastation | Low, internal |
| 2. Cross-Reference | Professional competence | Medium, analytical |
| 3. Tier Two | Heavy escalation | High, institutional weight |
| 4. No Good Options | Frustrated helplessness | Tense, spinning |
| 5. The Wagon | Warm hope | Release, laughter |

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## Arc Beats Served

| Beat | Source | Scene |
|---|---|---|
| The Reclassification | Ledger arc table | Scene 3 |
| Stay or Bolt | Leon arc table | Scene 4 |
| Bracelet manual-charge seed | New (this chapter) | Scenes 1 + 5 |
| Floundry victim pattern shift | Ch10 outline | Scene 3 |
| Defense vs. pursuit debate | Ch10 outline | Scene 4 |
| Mere analytical contribution | New (this chapter) | Scene 2 |
| Devod screentime before Ch12 | New (this chapter) | Scene 5 |

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## Continuity Checks Before Drafting

- Verify bracelet mechanics against Ch9 final (half power, dim glow, missing trickle-charge)
- Verify Floundry family details against Floundry case chapters (Ned's condition, Calla's characterization)
- Verify Leon's crystal guilt thread against Ch7-8 (identified as the Mallory he sold)
- Verify Tier Two promotion details against CLAUDE.md arc tables (retainer, Archive access, alias)
- Verify Devod's voice against Ch6 and character profile

## Canon Established

After drafting, update:
- `world/story-summary-book2.md` — Ch10 summary
- `world/timeline-book2.md` — Day 10 events
- `characters/phelan-varrant.md` — Tier Two status, bracelet manual-charge discovery
- `world/magic/exploits-log.md` — bracelet status (half power, no auto-recharge, manual charge seeded)
